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Losing You - December 12th 2010, 05:38 PM

Written: Sometime in 2008.

Losing You
By: Kaydea

You broke up with me.
Thinking it was the best for both of us.
And I don't know how you can't see,
the pain it's causing me.

Because now my thoughts
are invaded by my loss.
You invade my dreams
more than before.

You thought we should be friends,
before lovers.
But now it hurts to live;
Shouldn't even bother.

Because now my thoughts
are invaded by my loss.
You invade my dreams
more than before.

But I guess you saw
the pain in my eyes.
And I guess you heard,
the pain I was trying to disguise.

Because now when I'm awake,
you flood my thoughts.
And now when I sleep,
I don't feel pain in my dreams.
And now you are mine,
hopefully forever.
I can't lose you.

But I wish I could see,
your future with me.
Because uncertainty is killing me.
...You don't love me.
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Re: Losing You - December 13th 2010, 02:06 AM

I really enjoyed this. I hope you post more poems in the future.


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Re: Losing You - December 13th 2010, 02:18 AM

This was really great! I loved it.




   
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Re: Losing You - December 13th 2010, 03:10 AM

Thanks you guys. I appreciate the opinions.
That boost of confidence might convince me to post more of them.
...Not sure yet though. Heh.
Nervous & such. =/


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Re: Losing You - December 13th 2010, 06:44 AM

I love reading your poems. This one is amazing as well.
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