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Lies in disguise - January 22nd 2011, 01:32 AM

Starting to be longer gaps between posts, just can't right as much as I used to :/
It'd be really helpful right now.
Anyway feedback is always appreciated

Watch from the sideline
You wish that you'd fought her
It's just one more time
Your life crashed underwater
Failing at all that this life can test
You're set to wash up with the best
Though it might not seem right before tonight
You can sleep for the first time in the afterlife

Run to the restart
Keep your eyes on the prize
You just play your part
Of the lies in disguise
I know karma's not as forgiving
As the fantasy you're living in

Lay there with eyes wide
To keep afloat in the ocean
However hard I tried
I fell to sleep from the motion
I'm sure you'll tear me down whatever it takes
But don't right your wrongs with my mistakes
You see I have to try and live the lie
I still let you win but I don't know why

Run to the restart
Keep your eyes on the prize
You just play your part
Of the lies in disguise
You know karma's not as forgiving
As the fantasy you're living in

The dreams of past will fade some day
But the scars you caused won't fade away


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"Another year over, and we're still together.
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Re: Lies in disguise - January 22nd 2011, 05:13 AM

I absolutely reading your poetry.
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Re: Lies in disguise - January 22nd 2011, 10:32 AM

Thanks a lot


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Re: Lies in disguise - January 23rd 2011, 08:14 AM

This is exceptionally good. So powerful
   
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Re: Lies in disguise - January 23rd 2011, 09:28 AM

Brilliant. But I'd expect nothing less from you.


if you know the hunter's coming
then you hide or keep on running
'cause she's slain the gods before.
   
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Re: Lies in disguise - January 23rd 2011, 12:22 PM

Thanks so much guys, I really appreciate it


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Re: Lies in disguise - January 23rd 2011, 01:50 PM

Amelia, you are a beautiful writer. I love reading your poems.
   
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Re: Lies in disguise - January 23rd 2011, 02:51 PM

This is really good! The begining few lines were probably my favourite! I hope you put up more!
   
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Re: Lies in disguise - January 23rd 2011, 05:56 PM

Thanks so much guys.


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Re: Lies in disguise - January 24th 2011, 05:32 PM

I love it Amelia




   
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Re: Lies in disguise - January 24th 2011, 06:41 PM

Thankyou!!


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Re: Lies in disguise - January 25th 2011, 03:47 AM

This is incredible, as always Amelia.
<3
I've learned to expect nothing but something greater and greater each time, and you never fail me.
I love your writing so much.


When you can't find your way home,
and when life gets too hard to face on your own.
I will stand as a light through the darkness unknown,
I will walk with you, so you're never alone.
   
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Re: Lies in disguise - January 25th 2011, 06:32 AM

Thanks so much Kayla <3


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Re: Lies in disguise - January 25th 2011, 07:52 AM

it was great!!


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Re: Lies in disguise - January 26th 2011, 12:50 AM

Thankyou Gloria


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'Cause McFly never dies, because The Heart Never Lies!"
   
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