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loneliness feeling - February 6th 2011, 02:56 PM

Loneliness feeling

As the snow began to fall
My mind started to recall
How I wish you had been able to stay
I still have your smile you left for me as you walked away

At times, snow gives me a loneliness feeling
Now fixated on my window instead of the ceiling
Watching it fall on the ground and cars
Obscuring the night and its stars

I anticipated the morning and its beauty to see
How many inches would there be
Would my friend get a break from school tomorrow
Will I lay here and let my heart fill with sorrow

Sorrow at missing you
And all the things we have been through
You are the only one in my life who knows
My struggles but I guess that is how things in life goes

You carry on with your life with him
As I struggle to keep my head above water as I swim
I will always continue to love you
The only friend I ever really knew
   
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Re: loneliness feeling - February 6th 2011, 04:04 PM

AWWWH I LOVEDD THISS <3


Some things are beautiful because they are un-obtainable <3
   
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Re: loneliness feeling - February 6th 2011, 05:31 PM

this is great !! I feel your lonliness so much. :HUG:
I'm sorry you have to experience this. Your writing is wonderfull




"Think of your life as a book, move forward, close one chapter and open another." – Unknown

We give each other strength to make it through the darkness." – Silverstein

‎"Life is the art of drawing without an eraser." – John W. Gardner

"It is never too late to be what you might have been." – George Eliot

Every human life is worth the same, and worth saving." – J.K. Rowling
   
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Re: loneliness feeling - February 6th 2011, 07:39 PM

Thanks you guys! Your comments mean a lot to me.
   
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Re: loneliness feeling - February 7th 2011, 03:11 AM

Mary, I love this. Your writing is great.
   
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Re: loneliness feeling - February 7th 2011, 04:49 AM

Awwww I love you Mary. <3 This is beautiful.
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