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cracks and crevices in my perfect life - February 14th 2011, 05:10 PM

Another night, another day.
Life's no different in any way
Everythings changing but I'm incomplete.
Starve to win but I'm in defeat
I'm still crying and trying to carry on alone
People want to help me but I'm on my own
No-one understands the pain I'm in
Everyone hurts me and sends me stumbling
My tears drop like grains of sand
Time slips away between my hands
I look at life and how hard it can be
Each day I live is harder for me
Strangers smile across random streets
Unspoken words within eyes that meet
Glance briefly from one to another
What one feels is unknown to the other
All I see is fake smiles all round
But with each smile I come crashing down
I have no reason to smile or owt to be happy about
My heart is filled with tears and doubt
Another night another day
Life's no different in any way...
   
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Re: cracks and crevices in my perfect life - February 15th 2011, 12:21 AM

I really really like this poem and all I can say is I completely understand. Just know that you are not alone, you have everyone on TH here to suppport you.


"Shoot for the moon, even if you miss you'll land among the stars."

"For those who don't care, for those who can't see, never give up, always thrive to be free."

Smile, you are beautiful www.operationbeautiful.com

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Re: cracks and crevices in my perfect life - February 15th 2011, 05:52 PM

Thanks so much Nicole. You're support means so much to me. TH is all i have left..x
   
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Re: cracks and crevices in my perfect life - February 15th 2011, 05:55 PM

No problem, and TH have saved me numerous times.


"Shoot for the moon, even if you miss you'll land among the stars."

"For those who don't care, for those who can't see, never give up, always thrive to be free."

Smile, you are beautiful www.operationbeautiful.com

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Re: cracks and crevices in my perfect life - February 17th 2011, 11:29 AM

I love your poem Saba. Nicole is right. Please know you are not alone. We are here for you.
   
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Re: cracks and crevices in my perfect life - February 17th 2011, 12:49 PM

I love your poems !

And yes Nicole is totally right


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Re: cracks and crevices in my perfect life - February 17th 2011, 03:28 PM

Your poem is simply amazing. <3
You have my support on here as well


I was looking for a breath of life
For a little touch of heavenly light
But all the choirs in my head say, no oh oh
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Re: cracks and crevices in my perfect life - February 17th 2011, 04:45 PM

I really enjoy your poem. You aren't alone. <3


   
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Re: cracks and crevices in my perfect life - February 17th 2011, 06:58 PM

Thank you so much guys. You're support means everything to me. TH is all i have. You guys are all I have..x
   
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Re: cracks and crevices in my perfect life - February 18th 2011, 06:12 AM

This is so great. We are always here for you. <3
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Re: cracks and crevices in my perfect life - February 18th 2011, 05:14 PM

Thanks Kitty. You guys here on TH are everything for me.. Thanks for your support
   
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