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The Seven Pillars of Wisdom -
March 5th 2011, 11:13 PM
I've written this as the dedication at the start of my novel, which is almost finished and I'll be submitting to agents within 6 months hopefully. The novel has seven parts which I'm sure you can infer the meaning of from the poem??
1.) how does this flow? 2.) And are there any parts you stumble on - in terms of language, thought process and meaning? 3.) And how did you find the structure? 
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Re: The Seven Pillars of Wisdom -
March 6th 2011, 05:04 AM
This flows very well, and its a lovely poem.
"Shoot for the moon, even if you miss you'll land among the stars."
"For those who don't care, for those who can't see, never give up, always thrive to be free." Smile, you are beautiful www.operationbeautiful.com Blessed Be! Nicole AKA Nikki Artist, Poet, and Future Social Worker  |
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