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Perfect World. - April 13th 2011, 07:24 PM

What if i like Guys,What if i like Girls
That's Okay in Our Perfect World.


Even if your Gay, Your welcome to Stay.
If your trans, your welcome with open arms


If your a lesbian,this will be your Heaven.
If your bi this is a place you can fly.


This is a place for you and this is a place for me
This is a place for everyone and anyone to be free

What if i like guys, What if i like girls
That's okay in Our Perfect World.


   
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Re: Perfect World. - April 13th 2011, 08:34 PM

I still love this! Keep writing, you're really good. <3


Would you let me see beneath your beautiful
Would you let me see beneath your perfect
Take it off now girl, take it off now girl
I wanna see inside.
   
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Re: Perfect World. - April 13th 2011, 09:14 PM

Thank you! (:


   
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Re: Perfect World. - April 13th 2011, 09:42 PM

Oh my goodness, I love this!
This is so sweet. Your writing is good.<3


I was looking for a breath of life
For a little touch of heavenly light
But all the choirs in my head say, no oh oh
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Re: Perfect World. - April 14th 2011, 08:12 AM

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Oh my goodness, I love this!
This is so sweet. Your writing is good.<3
Thank-you


   
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Re: Perfect World. - April 16th 2011, 04:37 AM

This is really cool, Danielle


"Shoot for the moon, even if you miss you'll land among the stars."

"For those who don't care, for those who can't see, never give up, always thrive to be free."

Smile, you are beautiful www.operationbeautiful.com

Blessed Be!
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Re: Perfect World. - April 18th 2011, 10:07 AM

Love this poem, well done
<3


<3If we fall will we waste away<3
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Re: Perfect World. - April 18th 2011, 09:50 PM

Ooh this is amazing Danielle!
I wish we really did live a such a world
I hope to see more of your writing, this was lovely :3 x


I like to tell you that I'm ready
For whatever's coming
But to be honest there's a part of me
That loses control




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The things that used to mean so much to me...
have gone the way of dinosaurs...
hopes and dreams, and everything...
   
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Re: Perfect World. - April 19th 2011, 03:42 AM

The poem was amazing! and it only makes me think... If only.. Definately keep writing because it is very relateable and very hopeful for something that we should be fighting to get!!!! <3


Remember, The steeper the hill... The better the veiw in the end <3
Without Love Im always gonna be lost aren't I?



Your only mad 'cause I'm stronger now and you can't push me around

My Daddy once told me I was to weak to accomplish my dream, so I did it . . .


NEVER take life too seriously,
nobody gets out alive anyway ...
   
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Re: Perfect World. - April 19th 2011, 04:09 PM

This is beautiful, please keep writing!


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