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Half of a Chance - April 16th 2011, 01:02 AM

Half of a Chance
Living, breathing, talking for you,
Could it be I’m selling my soul for you?
You don’t know it, but it’s true.
You won’t ever feel the way I do.
I smile when you smile.
I laugh when you laugh.
You’re a gorgeous girl,
And you always smell fantastic.
So here I am just wishing,
Wishing for the day you’d see me,
See me how I see you,
But I don’t think you’ll ever know how strongly I feel.
So here I am just wishing,
Just wishing I had half a chance with you,
‘Cause every day makes me want you more,
And it kills me to think I can never have you.
How happy I would be,
To kiss your sweet lips,
How happy I would be,
Just to cuddle with you.
Will you ever know the truth?
Ever know how I truly feel?
Ever realize I’m addicted to you?
Girl I can’t catch my breath around you.
Intrigued by you,
No I’m not in love,
But you’re making me start to be.
Never felt this way before.
What I can do?
What can I say?
Will you ever see me the way I see you?
Please tell me one day I might have half of a chance.


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Re: Half of a Chance - April 16th 2011, 01:57 PM

This is a lovely poem! I'm sorry for what it stands for in your life right now, but I hope you will keep writing and expressing yourself in this way. Writing is a fantastic outlet! I really hope your situation improves.

I'm going to move this thread to the Self-Expression forum, as I think it may get more responses there. If anyone disagrees, feel free to PM me!
   
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Re: Half of a Chance - April 16th 2011, 04:03 PM

I love that you've used writing to express your feelings towards this girl.
I hope everything works out for you<3


I was looking for a breath of life
For a little touch of heavenly light
But all the choirs in my head say, no oh oh
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Re: Half of a Chance - April 16th 2011, 10:00 PM

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This is a lovely poem! I'm sorry for what it stands for in your life right now, but I hope you will keep writing and expressing yourself in this way. Writing is a fantastic outlet! I really hope your situation improves.

I'm going to move this thread to the Self-Expression forum, as I think it may get more responses there. If anyone disagrees, feel free to PM me!
Thanks. Yeah, it stinks. I'm just trying to find a way to deal. It's really hard being friends with her when I know how much I like her. She knows I like her (I think I mentioned...not sure) but I don't think she knows how much. Either way, I don't think she likes me back in the same way.

I've been writing ever since I knew how. It is a great way to cope with the difficulties of life. And thanks for moving it, I think it works in the Self-Expression section of the forum.

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I love that you've used writing to express your feelings towards this girl.
I hope everything works out for you<3
Thanks. I do too.


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Re: Half of a Chance - April 18th 2011, 07:47 AM

I love this. I can totally relate to it as well.


Nothing in the world is
the way it ought to be.
It's harsh, and cruel.

But that's why there's us - champions.
Doesn't matter where we come from,
what we've done or suffered,
or even if we make a difference.

We live as though the
world is as it should be,
to show it what it can be.
   
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Re: Half of a Chance - April 20th 2011, 02:12 AM

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I love this. I can totally relate to it as well.
Thanks. It's a stinky feeling, right? On the plus side, hopefully there will be someone better in the future.


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