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July 21st 2011, 07:27 AM
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I'm new here and kind of confuzzled. All I know is I need to vent. Your hands are greasy as they touch me everywhere. I can barely breathe ; I am gasping for air. You know you're not supposed to touch me there But you're so powerful ; you don't care It's dark and cold , but I realize The diseases that lie behind your emerald eyes Hidden behind a perfect disguise A kiss, a smile, a laugh, a lie Your hands are calloused as they spread my legs apart You shove yourself in me, shoving poison inside my heart I don't know where I am but I know that I'm so far from home ; where are you? I can't feel you in my heart Your hands leave bruises wherever they touch Wrestling inside your skin tight clutch Blood, gasoline, paint, sex and such God ! please stop this hurts so much Your hands are where they're not supposed to be You're deliberately (and painfully) violating me You're killing me ! Stop it ! Don't you see ! Oh, God ! where are you ? please come save me ! I wish I could say this is all a dream It's so unreal, I guess it may seem I am coming apart at the seams This is unlike anything I've ever seen And so unlike anything I've ever felt Your hands are undoing your belt I wish I stayed home I wish I never left Now I am filled with shame and regret My heart, soul and bones are breaking I'm dying with every choice you're making It's happening ! It's real ! I'm not faking ! Can you see me bleeding ? see me shaking? So much for wanting to go with my gut Why this happened, I'll never understand I may have forgotten you, but I'll never forget what you did with your hands  #OCKest2006 pride<3 #A7XFamForever  R.I.P. James Owen Sullivan, the Reverend Tholomew Plague We love and miss you, foREVer.<3 |
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July 23rd 2011, 02:48 AM
That is a beautiful poem, a sad one, but so beautiful, you really have great rhythm in it and I like it.
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July 23rd 2011, 05:22 AM
Thank you
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July 23rd 2011, 05:29 AM
The nature of the poem was kind of heartbreaking, and oddly beautiful. It was excellent insight on what goes on in the minds of abuse victims. You're strong for using your words to get through this, and putting it out there to inspire others. Not to mention...
You're a very talented writer, missy!
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July 23rd 2011, 06:20 AM
Aww thank you
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July 23rd 2011, 06:34 AM
Gotcha
See I'm new here and my sis told me it might get moved
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July 24th 2011, 01:51 PM
im usually emotional... but i started tearing (spell check?) up when i read this. its really good!
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July 25th 2011, 06:26 AM
Wow. This is a really great poem! Full of emotion. This is heartbreakingly beautiful. I'm sorry you went through this, hopefully you will find that TeenHelp is a great supportive environment. We're all here for you if you ever need to talk. You should keep writing and sharing them with us, you're really good <3
I'm burning out like a bright light, I wasn't ready for this. You're adorable as hell, but I'm glancing at your wrist.
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July 29th 2011, 06:10 AM
Wow! I really liked this. Oh so powerful. sooo well written. The flow was perfect and the rhymtem was smooth! Please Please keep writing!
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July 29th 2011, 08:48 PM
Okay okay I will
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August 1st 2011, 08:14 PM
this is awesome Sakura!
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