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Arrow coma- a dream - July 22nd 2011, 05:52 AM

"Daisy, stay here with me"
He whispers in my ear
I could imagine him hoping
I would open my eyes

The doctors pull him away from me
Something about a coma
Is what they speak

I feel my body shaking
And screams of pain
"Fuck the world, just stay with me.
Fuck everything, just don't leave me"

I want to say I'm sorry
But I'm to far away
In an imaginary place

But my world starts to crumble
As I feel tears drop on me
And I hear the voice
Begging for me

To dissapointed
Is like to die
So grabbing on to
A silver line

Following slowly as I feel more tears
Almost there
Sweet lips kissing my frozen mouth
I open my eyes
Trying to consentrate

He kisses me again
Then take me in his arms
And says to me
" don't ever scare me like that"


IN MY FIELD OF PAPER FLOWERS AND CANDY CLOUDS OF LULLIBIES, I LIE INSIDE MY SELF FOR HOURS, AND WATCH MY PURPLE SKY FLY OVER ME - IMAGINARY BY EVANESCENCE

to love someone is such a beautiful thing,
Keep it in your heart forever
And show it when you need to
   
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Re: coma- a dream - July 22nd 2011, 05:56 AM

this is good, I could picture it all happening! I love the story of it too, very good. also I love that it starts and ends with him talking! keep sharing with us(:


I'm burning out like a bright light, I wasn't ready for this. You're adorable as hell, but I'm glancing at your wrist.
   
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