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Poem: Perfect exterior - July 31st 2011, 07:50 PM

Just a little something I threw together without much thought. Enjoy!

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Behind this perfect exterior,
I'm someone else.
Behind this facade,
I can breathe.
Behind this shattered window,
I can let myself free.
Behind this distressed curtain,
I can live again.

Because of this perfect exterior,
you can never catch me.
Because of this facade,
you can never hear me.
Because of this shattered window,
you can never see me.
Because of this distressed curtain,
you can never find me.

I've built up these walls,
to keep you out.
I've built up these walls,
to keep myself in.
I've built up these walls,
to protect myself.
I've built up these walls,
to stop hurting.

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Let me know what you thought, thanks!


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Re: Poem: Perfect exterior - July 31st 2011, 09:45 PM

this is really good! (:


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Re: Poem: Perfect exterior - August 1st 2011, 12:44 AM

awesomee!!!! (:


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Re: Poem: Perfect exterior - August 1st 2011, 04:33 AM

I like it alot!! It reminds me of Adele'e "Turning Tables" for some reason!



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Re: Poem: Perfect exterior - August 1st 2011, 07:58 AM

Aaw, thanks all of you!

Jenn; Oh wow, thanks! I didn't think of it, but I really, REALLY love that song! <3


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