Freestyle Write - Who I Am

[Autumnwind]

A buddy of mine knows I want to become a hip hop artist, so he told me to freestyle today. I ended up creating something I really liked and was fortunate enough for him to record it. This is called Who I Am, and none of this was edited or written before it was said.

19 years old still don't know what's wrong with my life,
Try to fix everything but don't have the goals in mind,
No matter what I'll make you beleive I'll fight,
But I just turn your head long enough to miss the flight,

I'm like a romance novel, women come to be for hope,
Sit me on the shelf, collect dust, come back again to cope,
Give them the feeling of an artificial "whole",
Demote me back to dust catcher, throw me back in the cold,

My mind is like a hurricane, can't control the storm,
I'll flood every one of you if I let my thoughts go,
If you're close to me I'll make you feel my woes,
In a wicked way you would never get to know,

So I sit here and talk about to grab another pint,
This is my life, short, simple, and to the point of the knife,
If you're smart, you'd run away and hide,
Never get in the path I walk on this zip line.

[**Ordinary Day**]

I really like this. Well done! You must be pretty quick to do this on the fly!

[GoneBeyondRepair]

really really well done. C: