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Smile Poem: Society and School's Hate - November 8th 2011, 02:27 AM

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Twisted Pain
Feel the swelling of my brain
my head is pounding
This brain is beating out of my head
I can't stand this place
To all of them I am a disgrace
Seconds from snapping
Feel my sanity slipping
My anger is growing again
All I need is a friend
Beside me
Not likely
I'm all alone
Even the teachers hate
My creative mind is a debate
This poem is shakey
The floor under me is quaking
breaking and crumbling
Im falling into the shadows of my mind
It's a dark place
Feels as if my sanity will go and hide
With rage I am blind
Nobody is kind
I'm alone today
It doesnt feel okay
The pain society and schools put us through
Its unlikely
That any of these kids will like me
Just bite me
All they want to do is hate and fight
I just want to spread my wing
Feel them take flight
Flying away
Escaping the hate today

I hope you enjoy


My dad said girl's love guy's with scars...wheres the girl thats loving me?
Fighting is useless because they said I am just doomed to fail
"I ripped the wings off of an angel
and sowed them on my back
I watched them turn a darkening
bleeding the colour black
I soar above the clouds on these dark angel wings
keeping an eye on tortured souls
that live this life of pain"
   
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Re: Poem: Society and School's Hate - November 8th 2011, 02:37 AM

I really like this a lot!
   
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Re: Poem: Society and School's Hate - November 8th 2011, 02:53 AM

Thank you you are very kind <3 <3


My dad said girl's love guy's with scars...wheres the girl thats loving me?
Fighting is useless because they said I am just doomed to fail
"I ripped the wings off of an angel
and sowed them on my back
I watched them turn a darkening
bleeding the colour black
I soar above the clouds on these dark angel wings
keeping an eye on tortured souls
that live this life of pain"
   
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Re: Poem: Society and School's Hate - November 8th 2011, 07:07 AM

This is great.


Blackbird singing in the dead of night
Take these broken wings and learn to fly.
All your life
You were only waiting for this moment to arise.
the Beatles


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Re: Poem: Society and School's Hate - November 8th 2011, 07:29 PM

i'm here forever i'm not going anywhere ever. i'm sorry you've been hurt. i love you joshie. i love this





"Stop acting like you know what I've been through, you know nothing until you've actually lived every moment and felt every ounce of pain that I have."

"Someone asked me if i missed you, I just walked away then I whispered, so much" I'll miss you forever, Vernon and Charlene.

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Re: Poem: Society and School's Hate - November 8th 2011, 07:56 PM

I really like it! Good job!


I got off track I've made mistakes Back slid my way to that place where souls get lost lines get crossed and the pain won't go away.
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Re: Poem: Society and School's Hate - November 9th 2011, 02:10 AM

Thank you all <3 <3 <3 <3 <3


My dad said girl's love guy's with scars...wheres the girl thats loving me?
Fighting is useless because they said I am just doomed to fail
"I ripped the wings off of an angel
and sowed them on my back
I watched them turn a darkening
bleeding the colour black
I soar above the clouds on these dark angel wings
keeping an eye on tortured souls
that live this life of pain"
   
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Re: Poem: Society and School's Hate - November 9th 2011, 07:22 PM

your welcome <3 <3 <3





"Stop acting like you know what I've been through, you know nothing until you've actually lived every moment and felt every ounce of pain that I have."

"Someone asked me if i missed you, I just walked away then I whispered, so much" I'll miss you forever, Vernon and Charlene.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9bWrL...eature=related
   
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