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"that" feeling.. - November 9th 2011, 01:02 AM

There it is.
Its that feeling again.
It will randomly come,at all hours of the day.
That heaviness that just sits there.
It weighs me down.
Dragging me far underneath the regular line of human perception.
I now understand….nothing.
It wont go away.
Like the tick of death.
I cant shake it off, it doesn’t leave.
It inhabits my whole body.
Leaving nothing left of me.
Juat a continuing feeling of remorse
Deep regret of something
Maybe the fact that I know nothing would ever change no matter what I did?
No matter what I have done
No matter what I will try to do
As much as I would like it to be
It isn’t my fault
Its HERS
……...................
They say it’s a disease
A mind/heart/body/and soul destroying illness of its inhabitant
Well guess what..
It also destroyed ME.
My peace of mind is no longer.
I am constantly worrying, always looking over my shoulder,
Afraid to trust.
Because, when I find that trust, will it all be shattered again?
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Re: "that" feeling.. - November 9th 2011, 01:04 AM

Wow! I really like it! It is so amazing! Great job!


I got off track I've made mistakes Back slid my way to that place where souls get lost lines get crossed and the pain won't go away.
R.I.P. Tatyana Sawka June 20, 1998- April 9, 2012
   
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Re: "that" feeling.. - November 9th 2011, 01:45 AM

Really great job!
I actually felt the pain coming from the words .


stay strong.
   
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Re: "that" feeling.. - November 9th 2011, 02:00 AM

wow. I love this. Its so honest. And I love the ending, its so blunt. Great work keep sharing with us <3


I'm burning out like a bright light, I wasn't ready for this. You're adorable as hell, but I'm glancing at your wrist.
   
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