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Start to what i hope is a good story -
November 17th 2011, 09:04 PM
Well, this is the start to a story i hope to continue on with. I've never really shared my pieces before...i'd like some feedback or criticism if possible, to see if my work is any good i guess. please read
 hope you guys like it
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Re: Start to what i hope is a good story -
November 17th 2011, 09:06 PM
I wanna read it, but where is it?
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Re: Start to what i hope is a good story -
November 17th 2011, 09:18 PM
had some troubles saving >< its up now....but format was lost
 but all the content is there
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Re: Start to what i hope is a good story -
November 18th 2011, 07:20 PM
I think its good you should keep writing
good job
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Re: Start to what i hope is a good story -
November 18th 2011, 10:20 PM
I read it
 At first it seemed a little confusing but as I read more I got really interested! I think that you have some good ideas and could make a pretty good book out of this and I would for sure read it. Maybe just try to find some more descriptive words? Either way it's just the beginning right? Your doing a great job so keep working at it and I wan't to read more Also I wish I could write something as good as you can 
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Re: Start to what i hope is a good story -
November 18th 2011, 10:29 PM
aww well thanks! and yea, its just the beginning
i plan to continue it, i'll deffinately take another look at the descriptors
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