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Smile Poems(: Please tell me what you think! - November 27th 2011, 04:07 PM

* I recently started writing poems & I'd love to know what y'all think(: *

Thinking of You
The moment I wake up,
I think of you.

When I'm with my friends,
I smile and pretend that I'm listening,
When really,
I'm thinking of you.

Then I lay on my bed,
And I can't stop thinking about you,
No matter how hard I try.

Finally, after days of continously thinking of you,
I realize I'm in love,
Which only makes me think you of even more.

You Can't Change Her (this is kinda long, sorry :/ )
You might've done it with other girls,
But she knows who she is,
And you can't change her.

You should still love her even if,
She snorts when she laughs.

You should still love her even if,
She isn't the prettiest girl.

You should still love her even if,
She worries too much.

You should still love her even when,
She breaks down crying.

Because if you truely did love her,

You would be happy that she,
Has a sense of humor.

You would be glad that she,
Has an amazing personality.

You would be touched that she,
Cares about the word "us".

You would be ecstatic that she,
Has feelings.

Take her for who she is,
And don't change her if you truely love her.

Never Looking Back (last one & short)
When you came into my life,
Things seemed different,
A good different.

I thought you loved me,
I thought you made me feel special,
I thought I was the only girl you wanted to be with.

Then I found out,
She thought the exact same thing.

Now I'm gone,
And never looking back.

*Well, I hope they were good and you liked them! Please, tell me what you think. Thank you<3 *


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