That sweet sweet Breaking Point

[suicidaldreams]

They look so strong.
Look.
Look, is the key word.
They are,
But they are
Walking
the fine line in between
Strong, and done.
Broken.
The breaking point
Can come at any time.
Triggers
Are everywhere


They may be walking
That line, but they are lucky.
They still have a
Chance.
To turn around,
Before the weight of the world
Breaks their existence.


Unlike them,
Some have lost their luck
And they have given up on finding it.
We, who aren't so lucky.
We, who cant push back against
the weight of the world.
We, who have no hope,
nothing positive.
We, who have lost the will to
Survive on this precious Earth.
We, who cant see the light
That they should walk into when
Their final suicide attempt is
successful.
We, who do not belong
In that bright, dreamy heaven
That many don't see can exist.


We, are the people,
Who will serve the Devil
And carry out his dark deeds
Tempting others to join us.


We, are the people,
who finally see where we belong.
The outcasts of this world.
The ones who lie habitually,
with no cure in sight.
The ones who hurt everyone,
even though they care about them.


Our breaking point is already past.
We are no longer a member of those
That are strong.
Our time will come.
When we can leave,
And let those who are ment
to Survive,
Be at peace.


Our breaking point is done.
Now, we shall wait.
For that very special end,
Consisting of absolute darkness and dread.
But we shall all be fine,
It's where we belong.
We are used to that feeling.
That feeling is what our great minds consist of.

[GoneBeyondRepair]

this is really good O: i like it
and..

Originally Posted by suicidaldreams

We, are the people,
who finally see where we belong.
The outcasts of this world.

reminded me of Fallen Angels from black Veil Brides.
but i relly liked this

[suicidaldreams]

I love black veil brides ) haha i never realized that XP and thanks

[aqha]

I love it and you can just see the emotion in it Great job!

[Dez]

I love this because you can see the emotion so well and people can relate to it. Good job.