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Angel Kisses (part1) - December 11th 2011, 08:22 PM

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My mom never texts me when I'm at school.
My mom never tells me to sit down on the couch with her.
My mom never talks to me in that tone of voice.
But that day she did.
The day my world went black.
Her mouth was moving but I chose not to listen.
I asked her over and over again if she said
what I thought she said.
what I really hoped she didn't say.
I will never forget that horrible feeling.
My veins froze and my heart shriveled and stopped beating.
Pain and confusion flooded my brain
The day I found out she died.
I had to catch myself before the world went black.
I crashed to the floor and forced myself to breathe.
She's not dead she's not dead she's not dead
She's
NOT
Dead!
she was only sixteen... she can't be dead...
My body worked faster than my mind.
Before I could comprehend it
I was at her house, knocking furiously at her door.
No one answered. I let myself it, desperate to see her face.
"Where's Elizabeth?" I demanded.
The teary eyes and pale faces surrounded my vision.
Their pained voices whispered, "She's dead."
I crashed to the floor once again
as her beautiful face filled the sky.
When I opened my eyes, I was underwater.
Tears streamed down my face as I silently screamed her name.
I sobbed bitterly for hours...and hours...and hours...
She's.....
Dead....


   
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Re: Angel Kisses (part1) - December 11th 2011, 08:23 PM

(all fictional, from a story I've been writing)


   
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Re: Angel Kisses (part1) - December 12th 2011, 02:43 AM

WOW this is very nicely written hun. Good Work


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