I submitted this to my english teacher as part of my poetry assessment

katpanda

So, English assignment
He wants 8 poems out of me
I can be too particular
Can’t even pick a theme

In my room
Night time
Beep goes my laptop as the screen glows
Eyes strained on paper

Can’t even put the pen to paper
Music playing softly
Helps me think
Once again, I fall asleep

Rise

Quote:

Originally Posted by katpanda

So, English assignment
In my room
Night time
Beep goes my laptop as the screen glows
Eyes strained on paper

Can’t even put the pen to paper
Music playing softly
Helps me think
Once again, I fall asleep

Was that your poem? I like it, its very short poem but the meaning here is very strong! Keep it up

Iris. ♥

I like it. It's short and sweet.
It also cracks me up that it's a poem about your poetry assignment!

I hope you get a good grade on it.

BruceLeeDemarcus · R.I.P. Tatyana Sawka June 20, 1998- April 9, 2012

I really like it. It is very creative. great job!

GoneBeyondRepair · Repose en Paix, Mrs. Radoye♥ ~April 24, 2012~

xD that is so cool

a poem about a poetry assignment.. thats pretty cool. great job!

I'm-moving-on

Love it!

Ms.Meow

Nicely done, I enjoyed it.

sassygurlone

I like that you wrote a poem about your poetry assignment, I've done that before too. I like the poem, good job, I hope you get a good grade.

Thread Tools	Search this Thread
Show Printable Version Email this Page	Search this Thread: Advanced Search

katpanda Offline Member Average Joe *** Name: Kat Age: 16 Gender: Female Posts: 137 Join Date: December 5th 2011	I submitted this to my english teacher as part of my poetry assessment - December 12th 2011, 12:05 PM So, English assignment He wants 8 poems out of me I can be too particular Can’t even pick a theme In my room Night time Beep goes my laptop as the screen glows Eyes strained on paper Can’t even put the pen to paper Music playing softly Helps me think Once again, I fall asleep

Iris. ♥ Offline C'est la vie. ♥ I've been here a while ******** Name: Sammi Age: 18 Gender: Female Location: IRAW. Posts: 1,840 Join Date: July 19th 2011	Re: I submitted this to my english teacher as part of my poetry assessment - December 23rd 2011, 11:43 PM I like it. It's short and sweet. It also cracks me up that it's a poem about your poetry assignment! I hope you get a good grade on it.

BruceLeeDemarcus Offline Member I've been here a while ******** Name: Rachel Age: 15 Gender: Female Location: leaving the stage in the middle of a song (Michigan) Posts: 1,629 Join Date: July 22nd 2011	Re: I submitted this to my english teacher as part of my poetry assessment - December 23rd 2011, 11:53 PM I really like it. It is very creative. great job! I got off track I've made mistakes Back slid my way to that place where souls get lost lines get crossed and the pain won't go away. R.I.P. Tatyana Sawka June 20, 1998- April 9, 2012

I'm-moving-on Offline Buddy Experienced TeenHelper ****** Name: I have one of those? Age: 17 Gender: Female Location: Internet World Posts: 646 Join Date: November 20th 2011	Re: I submitted this to my english teacher as part of my poetry assessment - December 24th 2011, 09:05 AM Love it! Here's to the strong; thanks to the brave. Don't give up hope: some people change. Against all odds, against the grain, Love finds a way: some people change.

Ms.Meow Offline Member Welcome me, I'm new! * Posts: 34 Join Date: December 26th 2011	Re: I submitted this to my english teacher as part of my poetry assessment - December 28th 2011, 04:55 AM Nicely done, I enjoyed it.

TeenHelp Features