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| View Poll Results: Who moves on to round 3!? The top 4 do! | |||
| Cerberus by Beetbox |
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1 | 7.69% |
| Puddles by Coffee |
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4 | 30.77% |
| The Sirens by Eldora |
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1 | 7.69% |
| Un-named by Anonymous |
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1 | 7.69% |
| Under The Tree |
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1 | 7.69% |
| Cree by Craz33me |
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2 | 15.38% |
| Stay by Gone Beyond Repair |
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1 | 7.69% |
| Something More by Intoxicated Brutality |
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2 | 15.38% |
| Voters: 13. You may not vote on this poll | |||
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***December Poetry Contest Round 2*** -
December 16th 2011, 04:13 AM
Hello everyone. Now that (hopefully) everyone has seen the winners. I will post up Round 2 contestants.
Cerberus by Beetbox Puddles by Coffee The Sirens by Eldora Un-named by Anonymous (You know who you are! There were only 1 of you!) Under The Tree (I misread this as under the sea. Rofl) Mr. Gir Cree by Craz33me Stay by Gone Beyond Repair Something More by Intoxicated Brutality These are the winners of Round 1. The way Round 2 works, I will post the poems here, every one of you will read them :3 and vote on them! I will vote too, but whoever gets the most votes win! Please, and I sincerely ask, please make sure you vote fairly. I do not want this turning into a popularity contest, or a who has more friends contest. Please read every poem (or stop at one that you absolutely think no other one can beat) and base your vote off of what YOU like. Meaning flow, creativeness, length, and everything else. I want this to be as fair as possible. Below are the poems that you shall read and vote for Who will be the winner!?You can post who you voted for and why if you want, it's not needed, but you can if you want ![]() ______________________________________________ Cerberus by Beetbox Cerberus awaits you on the river stix he whispered I stumbled in vain to the ticking of his heart The heart that struggles for every beat Cerberus smiles with my forgotten defeat. in the concrete jungles we call our homes, villains await masked in love they steal our hearts, to the clocks facade of timees long past and enemys made tick tock, tick stop! the times not gone, we still have hope, so please hold on As the blood flows down the river stix, caused by blades that went too deep, Cerberus waves his heads in glee, as hades comes to take over me. ______________________________________ Puddles by Coffee Darkness puddles beneath her eyes. Her sanity is tearing, conscious keeping her up at night. She asks me what is wrong or right, pieces of her mind trying to be nailed back together. She thanks me. They are thank- less. She guides them through puddles, through the depths of their troubles that nails them to previous lives. She tears them from wrong, brings them to right, to light; they leave her alone in the night. She calls me on these late nights, pleads to me, yanks to me. Thanks to me, she’s calm. Right -eous, she brushes puddles from her sinking, tearing eyes, and nails posters to empty walls. Her fingernails frow back. She tells me all is right, all is well, before she tears the posters off the walls. “Thanks for nothing!” she cries, her protest words puddle to the floor. She is right. We’ve lost the will, the want, the right to try to nail schools back together, to soak up oil puddles off sea otters, to retrieve women from their night- ly routines. Nobody thanks you for the right thing. So she tears up her fliers, off her organic clothes, her tears permantely stain her worn face. It’s time to write her term papers, to say no thanks to helping others, to rip up her fingernails from conscious. To never sleep a night. Let authenticity puddle into lost tears on the floor. Her heart is nailed to righteous, sleepless nights, thankless days. Her sanity melts into silent puddles. ________________________________________ The Sirens by Eldora I The frustration is killing me; My sorrow's rewards have hidden deep: These words I long to speak can escape no more, All that's left for me is an empty sail. II For once it seems I can't find my solace here,Far inside my mind the monster waits for me; I can't clear my head of these silent dreams, For no one can hear them but myself, And my imagination wanders freely where it's forbidden. III Casting about thses stones only feeds the Sirens;Singing me toward the sharp stones with my soul as their weapon; I'm blinded by my visions of what life should be like, And I lose track of the sailors aboard the same ship as I, Those who risk their life and limb to rescue me. IV They try to tug me back in but I tumble instead, Headfirst toward the dark and tumultous waters that churn below, Into the depths of the monster's mawl and closer to my doom; Half my loyal saviors clinging to the coat that acted as no defense, The coat that was no shield against the cold waters; And half of those saviors are pulled in after me. V There is no time to weep,For my brethren and I are swallowed whole By the waves of sadness far below. _________________________________ Un-named by Anonymous A butterfly flits through the yard, Finally alighting on a bright red flower. It snakes its long tongue down inside And sips the flower’s sweet nectar. The butterfly is a brilliant purple. It sparkles in the sunlight, shimmering a million different vibrant colors. It’s beautiful, so full of life. But it is a false beauty. The butterfly is dying, won’t last long. Choking on the brightness around it. Fragile wings that seem so strong in sun, crack in the wind and blow away. The butterfly is nothing but dust. ______________________ Under the Tree by Mr. Gir Rest Child Under the Tree Which bears no life Succumb to the beauty Succumb to the death See pleasure in pain And the fight of life The Magic of the Darkness The Light of the Night Stars shine down Through branches of air Nothingness Behold His smile His grin His tear His laughter His fears King of Darkness Princess of Night Under the tree Which bears no life _______________________ Cree by Craz33me Hear my cree, listen to me, I'm not the person- I seem to be. Look in my eyes, Don't say goodbye, learn the truth- behind the lies. Read my lips, release the whips, feel the cold steel, see the blood drips. I scream and shout, without a doubt, no one can hear me, no one's about. ______________________ Stay by Gone Beyond Repair You make my skies turn gray My darkness into day I'm scared you'll go away So please promise you'll stay I'm sorry if you fear I don't want to make you tear I want to have you near I just need to have you here I want to see you happy This probably sounds sappy I dont want you to feel crappy I wont try to make you snappy You make my skies turn gray My darkness into day I'm scared you'll go away So please promise you'll stay _________________________ Something More by Intoxicated Brutality Deflect my empty memories, Cut straight to the core of me, You really ought not, Yet still you try to dissect my thoughts, Look - there are monsters in my head, Listen - there are demons lurking under my bed, I have no hope of escaping them, Because it's from you they all stem, Just leave me here with tears pouring down my cheeks, Fears haven't been this strong in weeks, Fell down again, nowhere left to go, Healing had begun once, even if only slow, Somehow you break through my defenses, Leave me gasping, breathless, Only trying to lend a helping hand, Always doing the best I can, Nothing is ever good enough for you, With everything you put me through, I've decided emotional retraction, Is easier than facing the reaction, Can't deal with it, so I'll do what you've never done before, I'm moving on - I'll become something more |
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Re: ***December Poetry Contest Round 2*** -
December 18th 2011, 09:48 AM
They are all so beautiful, its difficult to pick :-o
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Theres always someone. <3
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Re: ***December Poetry Contest Round 2*** -
December 18th 2011, 01:28 PM
I voted when Robert first posted this (or not long after at least) but just wanted to say who I voted for.
Craz33me, I really really enjoyed your piece so I voted for you. Wonderful job. Everyone else who submitted work, you guys all did a great job. It's impressive to see how much talent TH has. (or to at least see a small portion of it) ♪♫"The mirror only shows The shell of what's below You can't go on suffering The illusion of control It's time for letting go You can't go on suffering And now you know Now you know"♪♫ 'Now You Know' - 2Cents Things get better. Always keep fighting. ❤Feel free to PM/VM, or add me if you ever need a friend, or someone to talk to. I'm online quite often. ![]() |
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Re: ***December Poetry Contest Round 2*** -
December 18th 2011, 03:58 PM
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