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Tearing my world apart -
December 18th 2011, 03:52 PM
This is a new poem i wrote in about 10 minutes, based off whats been going on today, tell me what you think.
Why? Constantly fighting All I ever hear Never a break Never silence My world crashing down around me All I know Is whats going around me I never understand Is this necessary? Can you not see What it does to me Tearing me apart Why me Why this Can you not see Your ripping me to shreds Of course you can’t Your too busy Yelling, screaming Trying to breath Calm myself Stop these tears From staining my cheeks Stop these trembling hands This is too much Not again I can’t do this Please stop Why can’t you see You’re killing me You’re tearing my world apart  <3 "I'll never let you fall, I'll stand up with you forever. i'll be there through it all" <3 |
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December 18th 2011, 05:09 PM
this is really good josh
 i like it
username used to be snowstorm promises mean everything, but once they're broken, sorry means nothing. Ill be fine, I swear..... Im just Gone Beyond Repair -Mayday Parade Repose en Paix, Mrs. Radoye♥ ~April 24, 2012~ |
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December 18th 2011, 06:17 PM
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 , it had been awhile since i put a poem on here and i wrote this this morning because of everything going on and the fact i had a break down.
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a secret you can keep
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December 18th 2011, 06:30 PM
meltdowns sure suck. i hope your feeling better though
username used to be snowstorm promises mean everything, but once they're broken, sorry means nothing. Ill be fine, I swear..... Im just Gone Beyond Repair -Mayday Parade Repose en Paix, Mrs. Radoye♥ ~April 24, 2012~ |
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Re: Tearing my world apart -
December 18th 2011, 06:57 PM
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a secret you can keep
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December 18th 2011, 07:04 PM
thats good! and thanks. ive been listening to 'Ocean and Atlantic' like, nonstop for almost a week now. and 'Jersey' every few hours. and also 'Miserable at Best'
username used to be snowstorm promises mean everything, but once they're broken, sorry means nothing. Ill be fine, I swear..... Im just Gone Beyond Repair -Mayday Parade Repose en Paix, Mrs. Radoye♥ ~April 24, 2012~ |
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Re: Tearing my world apart -
December 18th 2011, 09:12 PM
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a secret you can keep
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Name: Samuel
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Re: Tearing my world apart -
December 18th 2011, 10:14 PM
lol, it seems that everytime in im a greatass mood, i listen to BVB. whenver i feel anything else, its Mayday Parade
 or Dashboard Confessional. lol
username used to be snowstorm promises mean everything, but once they're broken, sorry means nothing. Ill be fine, I swear..... Im just Gone Beyond Repair -Mayday Parade Repose en Paix, Mrs. Radoye♥ ~April 24, 2012~ |
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