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C'est la vie. ♥
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In Between. -
December 19th 2011, 05:24 AM
This is a song I wrote a couple months back about my parents. Obviously, it's titled "In Between." Please ignore the slashes. That's just how I write music. It makes sense in my mind that way. Sorry if it bugs you. Also, I know it can be tough trying to read music without knowing the tune that the writer intended. For now, just make up a tune that you feel works with the song. As always, please feel feel to review. Comments and criticism are both helpful to me becoming a better writer. Hope you like it.
 Tell me why you'll never see|The way that your words cut me deep|Show me why you'll never know|I don't have a spot to call my home||If it keeps you happy|If that's what you need|I'll stay somewhere in between|I'll sacrifice myself for you|I always do||Let the silent tears run down my face|Focused on the things I can't erase|Try to hide the pain|Will it always be this way|But||If it keeps you happy|If it's what you need|I'll show something in between|I'll sacrifice myself for you|I always do||And the thoughts that put my heart to shame|The broken prize from your four year game|I'll let it stay|Let you have your way|I'll get by|I'll live my life|Cuz||If it makes you happy|If that's what you need|I'll stay somewhere in between|I'll sacrifice myself for you|I always do|And if it makes you happy|If that's what you need|I'll just live somewhere in between |
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C'est la vie. ♥
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December 19th 2011, 05:51 AM
Thank you so much! That means a lot to me.
I'll try to post more of my music and poetry ASAP. I have a lot that's just piling up, which isn't good. It's meant to be shared!
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a secret you can keep
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December 19th 2011, 05:29 PM
i really like this Sammi
great job 
username used to be snowstorm promises mean everything, but once they're broken, sorry means nothing. Ill be fine, I swear..... Im just Gone Beyond Repair -Mayday Parade Repose en Paix, Mrs. Radoye♥ ~April 24, 2012~ |
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a secret you can keep
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December 19th 2011, 06:36 PM
your welcome
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December 19th 2011, 06:52 PM
It's really hard for me to place lyrics to a tune but I kinda made it up in my head as I read.
 The lyrics are awesome! Keep on writing lovely. <3
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C'est la vie. ♥
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December 19th 2011, 07:13 PM
Hahah, no worries. That's usually what I do, since I write the lyrics before the music. I just mess with it and see what works. :3
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December 19th 2011, 09:11 PM
i really like this! great job.
 Stay Strong If you need someone to talk to im always here. PM me any time. <3 Don't stop believin' |
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December 19th 2011, 09:18 PM
Very good, i am impressed. I would really like to read some more stuff you've wrote
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