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Untitled - December 19th 2011, 09:31 PM

I don't have a name for this poem, but if you think of one please reply. Comment if you think its good (i don't)

She always tries to be her best,
But they scrutinize her every move,
She tries to be nice,
They say she's a bully,
She tries to get good grades,
They're never good enough,
She tries to be good at things,
They say she messes it up,
And by "they" its always just herself,
Thinking she's never good enough

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Re: Untitled - December 19th 2011, 09:37 PM

i like this alot. really. i kinda relate
but i like this<3


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Re: Untitled - December 19th 2011, 10:12 PM

Fantastic! I love it! Great job!


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Re: Untitled - December 20th 2011, 03:47 AM

Thanks Rachel, and Samuel. Im glad you guys like it.



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Re: Untitled - December 20th 2011, 03:50 AM

I like this a lot! I was trying to brainstorm a title, but I didn't get anywhere. I'll let you know if I think of one.



   
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Re: Untitled - December 20th 2011, 03:56 AM

hmm.. i was thinking.. maybe 'Her biggest bully' could work as a title? if you like it that is


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Re: Untitled - December 21st 2011, 04:03 AM

Thanks Sammi! And i like that name. thank you. <3 I'll use that.



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Re: Untitled - December 21st 2011, 05:40 AM

Wow love this! Seriously describes my life! Haha
   
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Re: Untitled - December 21st 2011, 11:36 PM

Thank you. Im sorry it describes your life. It sadly describes mine too.



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Re: Untitled - December 22nd 2011, 12:33 AM

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And i like that name. thank you. <3 I'll use that.
thats awesome! im glad you like it c;


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