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your my everything - December 22nd 2011, 11:46 PM

kay, so, this is the first song ive ever even attempted. critique would be lovely. good or bad, i would really appreciate it alotly. thanks

As I lay my head down tonight
My head once again filled with fright
I think back
On all the words
You have said
The love
The talks
The memories
They’re all now a part of me
I’ll never leave
I’ll never-

When you picked me up
Off the ground
You mended me
You made a crown
I became someone
In my life-

Your parting words
I understand
Just remember me
I’ll take you hand
You’re the only knight
I’ll ever need-

I’ll pick you up
Off the ground
I’ll try mending you
I’ll make a crown
You’re more than just someone
In my life-

I don’t wanna be up
If you’re down
You’re my everything
You’re every sound
So let’s walk through the waves
And fly away-

We’ll catch each other
If we fall
We’ll mend our wings
We’ll rule this town
We’ll become someone
That we want to be-
Cuz baby,
You’re my everything


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Re: your my everything - December 23rd 2011, 01:04 AM

okay, that almost made me cry, that is really good, the only thing i can't exactly visuallize is the instrumental track that would go with it


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Re: your my everything - December 23rd 2011, 01:43 AM

aww, thanks so much Kylee!
i kinda have a tune, but not really like, a whole thing but i dont plan on singing it either, soooooo


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