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a secret you can keep
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your my everything -
December 22nd 2011, 11:46 PM
kay, so, this is the first song ive ever even attempted. critique would be lovely. good or bad, i would really appreciate it alotly. thanks
As I lay my head down tonight My head once again filled with fright I think back On all the words You have said The love The talks The memories They’re all now a part of me I’ll never leave I’ll never- When you picked me up Off the ground You mended me You made a crown I became someone In my life- Your parting words I understand Just remember me I’ll take you hand You’re the only knight I’ll ever need- I’ll pick you up Off the ground I’ll try mending you I’ll make a crown You’re more than just someone In my life- I don’t wanna be up If you’re down You’re my everything You’re every sound So let’s walk through the waves And fly away- We’ll catch each other If we fall We’ll mend our wings We’ll rule this town We’ll become someone That we want to be- Cuz baby, You’re my everything username used to be snowstorm promises mean everything, but once they're broken, sorry means nothing. Ill be fine, I swear..... Im just Gone Beyond Repair -Mayday Parade Repose en Paix, Mrs. Radoye♥ ~April 24, 2012~ |
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In a world full of bloo ponies
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Re: your my everything -
December 23rd 2011, 01:04 AM
okay, that almost made me cry, that is really good, the only thing i can't exactly visuallize is the instrumental track that would go with it
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a secret you can keep
I've been here a while
******** Name: Samuel
Age: 15
Gender: Female
Location: ill be here by the ocean just waiting for proof that theres sunsets and sillouette dreams
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Re: your my everything -
December 23rd 2011, 01:43 AM
aww, thanks so much Kylee!
![]() i kinda have a tune, but not really like, a whole thing but i dont plan on singing it either, soooooo
username used to be snowstorm promises mean everything, but once they're broken, sorry means nothing. Ill be fine, I swear..... Im just Gone Beyond Repair -Mayday Parade Repose en Paix, Mrs. Radoye♥ ~April 24, 2012~ |
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