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Cockroaches - December 23rd 2011, 05:20 AM

The walls
Pulsating
Speaking
Breathing

Cockroaches in the corner
Hiding under my bed
Sliding beneath my sheets
Don’t let her find me

Don’t let them find me
I can’t, they’re all around
Constantly there,
Constantly watching

We’re here for you
We’re the good ones, yes?


Find comfort in the love
Newborn fluff full of fur
Until the cockroach returns
Suffocating inside her

Find comfort in song
Musical colors, whispering around
Until the words form attacks
Nameless songs, pathetic sounds

Cockroaches return
Steal everything from me
Climb up the walls
Form packs to fight

Don’t steal my baby
Don’t steal my savior

Give her to us,
She’s only there to harm
We’re the good ones, yes?


Fight the urges
Stretched skin
Permanent scars
Forever forbidden

Doors are open
Doors are open wide
They will find you,
Hide beneath the sheets
They always will
Share with the cockroaches



Take me seriously.
I dare you.



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Re: Cockroaches - December 23rd 2011, 06:14 PM

woah. o_0 this is awesome
great job


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Re: Cockroaches - December 24th 2011, 09:55 PM

I really like this, nice work (:
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Re: Cockroaches - December 25th 2011, 01:03 AM

Really nice poem! I particularly enjoyed the imagery here:

Find comfort in song
Musical colors, whispering around


Great job! Keep writing!
   
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Re: Cockroaches - December 25th 2011, 02:10 AM

This is so visual, so real....
So beautifully dark...
Awesome job.


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Re: Cockroaches - December 25th 2011, 02:26 AM

thanks guise.



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I dare you.



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Re: Cockroaches - December 25th 2011, 05:52 PM

This is really amazing. Kinda creepy, but in a good way!


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The last word on your breath
I'll be the one to keep you
I'll keep you at your best



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Re: Cockroaches - December 26th 2011, 04:57 AM

Oh my god what is this I don't even.

This is really amazing!!


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Someone out there can't stop thinking about you. You Are Beautiful. Don't ever believe differently."

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Re: Cockroaches - December 28th 2011, 05:00 AM

Great poem, I thought it was very well composed.
   
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Re: Cockroaches - December 30th 2011, 12:30 AM

It is really awesome! Great job!


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Re: Cockroaches - December 30th 2011, 02:56 AM

Thanks you guys I dunno what to say lol



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Re: Cockroaches - December 30th 2011, 07:08 PM

At first I was kind of confused by the title, I've never read a poem about cockroaches but once I read it I actually like it.


"Shoot for the moon, even if you miss you'll land among the stars."

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