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Cancer. - December 23rd 2011, 02:11 PM

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Hey guys, I know I've been MIA for the past couple of days - a friend of the family who is like a grandmother to me has been diagnosed with liver cancer and it's REALLY hard on me. She's the only person I can talk to about my daughter because she's had a stillborn son and she understands. She's truly an Angel to me and I really hope she pulls through (she's been diagnosed with many other illnesses in the past and is very, very old so I'm hoping she's going to be ok).

I wrote a (very short) poem for her. I don't think it's very good but any feedback would be wonderful. Thanks guys.

Cancer.
Hurtful word, terrible illness
Broken hearts shatter in an instant
Upon the horrendous news

Cancer.
No one wants it for themselves or anyone else
Wishes are irrelevant
Hopes and prayer become most important

Cancer.
Love increases, support increases
Nothing matters except Cancer's patient
Their life is what matters. Her life matters

Cancer,
Please don't take her from me.



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Re: Cancer. - December 23rd 2011, 05:43 PM

Britt, this poem is really good. It shows exactly how you feel, which is kind of the whole point of a poem like this one! I'll be praying for your "grandmother", okay? Text me if you want to talk!

Also, listen to this song when you get a chance. It's a really good song about staying strong through cancer -- whether it's your own or someone you love.



   
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Re: Cancer. - December 23rd 2011, 06:15 PM

i know what its like to have someone you care about deeply dignosed with cancer. im sorry this has happened
but. i do like this poem. its very good. stay strong, and i hope shell be okay!


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Re: Cancer. - December 23rd 2011, 10:04 PM

Awwe its really nice! Times are tough when things like that happen. I hope everything gets better!


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