To sleep, perchance to dream

[ReluctantPegasister]

A Hamlet related poem for school, looking for feedback. Be warned, it does have some anti-Christian wording in it.

To sleep, perchance to dream
To sleep, perchance to dream
To dream of a better day
A brighter one
To die and dream
To sleep, perchance to dream
Of sun-lit worlds to explore
Dream of pearly gates
And angel wings.
To dream the good and not the bad
Closing your eyes and resting in a cloud,
Lulled to sleep
by the screams of thieves, liars, adulterers.
Lay upon your pillow and think not
of the starving thief,
the childhood liar,
the adulteress of an abusive husband.
They deserve to have their flesh burned off.
You shall sleep, perchance to dream,
of the heaven waiting for you.

[Ms.Meow]

Hmm, interesting, its different and I like it.