Untitled.

[Iris. ♥]

I figured it's time I post something else. I wrote this when my cousin thought she was going to pass on. Same things as always: ignore the slashes because that's the way I write music. Feedback is greatly appreciated. If you have an idea for a good title, feel free to suggest it. I hate having untitled work.

This fear that I'm gonna lose you|Is almost too much to bear|I'm holding onto my false illusions|Trying not to care|'Cause what good will it do|To cry over you|No matter what I do|I'm gonna lose| Meeting you has changed me|Knowing you has shaped me|I don't know how to stand alone|What can you show me now|I must let go somehow|'Cause what good will it do|To cry over you|No matter what I do|I'm gonna lose|And I guess I'll just hold onto|What I have|Ill try to focus on the here and now|Ignoring what is sure to come|Taking all I've learned from you|And using it to be someone|'Cause the thought that I'm gonna lose you|Is almost too much to bear|It may not happen soon|But that doesn't mean|That I don't care

Like I've said before, if you ever want me to check out some of your work in this forum, send me a link to it. I'd be glad to give you my thoughts.

[ToGoOmniscient]

This. Gave. Me. Chills.

Being a hopeless romantic and someone who hates losing people in her life, I actually can relate to this.

Amazing.

And I don't have the links to stuff I've written, but I posted something a couple days ago? "Alive"?

[Ms.Meow]

Good, I like this. Its sad, I've never had anyone close in the hospital or about to die, but I can see how it could be confusing when its someone your rely heavily on. Thats what I got from your song lyrics. So I guess you expressed your point well.

Nice job.

[Soliloquy]

Wonderful! Absolutely brilliant. You mentioned music -- does this have a tune? If you ever get around to recording it, we'd certainly love to hear it!

The lyrics, though, are beautiful. They say so much and are very moving! As for the title, I know it can be extremely frustrating to have untitled work. However, don't let it get you down! I find that inspiration comes at the most unexpected times. For example, I got an idea during an English test once. You will think of something!

Keep up the great work!

[Iris. ♥]

Thanks guys! Your feedback made me smile.

Originally Posted by XxToTheDeathxX

And I don't have the links to stuff I've written, but I posted something a couple days ago? "Alive"?

I'll definitely check that out.

Originally Posted by Ms.Meow

Good, I like this. Its sad, I've never had anyone close in the hospital or about to die, but I can see how it could be confusing when its someone your rely heavily on. Thats what I got from your song lyrics. So I guess you expressed your point well.

Nice job.

Awh, I'm glad you got what I was trying to express! It's definitely a scary thing to have someone you love close to death. I hope you don't have that experience anytime soon.

Originally Posted by Soliloquy

Wonderful! Absolutely brilliant. You mentioned music -- does this have a tune? If you ever get around to recording it, we'd certainly love to hear it!

It does have a tune! But, it's kind of hard to describe what a tune is supposed to sound like, so I kind of just let people pick for themselves. I actually don't have a place where I can record something that sounds awesome, but if I do record, I'll definitely put it up!