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December 28th 2011, 10:27 PM
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Ashpixiated by my thoughts and visions,
I am trapped by all my 'bad' desisions, Looking in the mirror and seeing my reflection, Leaves me sat there in complete perplexion. Ugly, discusting, fat, I can't believe I look like that, So I starve myself from food of all sort, Throwing away any consumable thing that is brought. My body in my eyes, Is something I despise, Others say its beautiful and pretty, But really I don't need thier pitty. Underweight the scales read, Well thats something I don't need, Size [edit] emo bitch, Might as well be a friggin fat witch. Hair growing copper and gold, Painted eyes in black so bold, Body curved and fat, To be honest I look like a twat. |
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December 28th 2011, 10:30 PM
This is beautiful, not by how its written, but by how I can understand what your going through just by reading a few lines. Feeling low about yourself like this is very difficult to go through, especially someone as young as you. The way you look on the outside is not nearly as important as how you view life around you. Stay strong
When someone apologizes enough times for something they'll never stop doing I think its fearless to stop believing them. I think its fearless to say "Your NOT sorry" and walk away.
I have died everyday waiting for you, darling don't be afraid I have loved you for a thousand years. I'll love you for a thousand more <3  ~You are my hero~ |
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December 29th 2011, 12:10 AM
Hey Beth!
Nice poem! Sorry that I had to edit the clothing size out, but posting numbers goes against the terms of service as it could be triggering to others, unfortunately!  However, even with this change, I think the meaning of this poem is still loud and clear. I really enjoyed the first two lines:"Ashpixiated by my thoughts and visions, I am trapped by all my 'bad' desisions" Nice rhyme, nice flow! Keep writing!
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Why so Serious?
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December 29th 2011, 12:52 AM
great poem very powerful with great imagery i can really feel the emotion and theres a good sense of flow
 The world ain't all sunshine and rainbows. It is a very mean and nasty place and it will beat you to your knees and keep you there permanently if you let it. You, me, or nobody is gonna hit as hard as life. But it ain't how hard you hit; it's about how hard you can get hit, and keep moving forward. How much you can take, and keep moving forward. PM me if you need to talk about ANYTHING. |
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December 29th 2011, 01:24 AM
I am very impressed with this writing, i would like to read some more of yours. You have great imagery in this as well.
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December 29th 2011, 04:10 PM
I like this! Very nice and flowing, & very emotive.
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January 4th 2012, 02:23 AM
You are beautiful the way you are,
You have already raised the bar, Don't listen to those others mean words, Fly high, like a bird, way up in the sky, it may just get you by.   R.I.P. Clementyne Fishman, gone too soon, but never forgotten |
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