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December 30th 2011, 03:23 PM
This anger
Cant come out And im not sure why. Its overpowered by my Sadness Of a love lost A sweet puppy love A dear friend. Always there. But my anger is masked By this frettful event. My anger towards you. It makes me so frustrated. I only tend to cry. Dry tears Cuddle my broken Heart. You hurt me. Just like the others. And I made more excuses For these actions Than you will ever knmow. I blamed all my scars On my past When they came to be Triggered by The one and only you My anger This intolorable pain. I stood up for you. And what happened? I made the same mistake you perfect son made. And I take the blame The shame of Reoccuring, stronghold stupidity. Never good enough. Go ahead and believe Him. Of course its true. Its him. Your yelling pierced my heart. Time and time again. Never ending Shame is my Reward. Covering it all With various excuses. But no matter what It's all about you And you will never ever See The pain Inside Me. |
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C'est la vie. ♥
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December 30th 2011, 04:25 PM
Wow. I loved this. You did an incredible job portraying all the emotions. It got to the point where I was feeling hurt and upset by the end. That's a sign of a great writer. I also like that it wasn't 100% clear what happened between the two of you. It leave something up to the imagination. Keep up the good work!
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Re: It's All About you -
January 5th 2012, 12:58 AM
I really like it! Great job!
 I got off track I've made mistakes Back slid my way to that place where souls get lost lines get crossed and the pain won't go away. R.I.P. Tatyana Sawka June 20, 1998- April 9, 2012 |
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that makes me feel really good about my writing thank you for the input 
