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Broken... Thoughts? - January 3rd 2012, 05:50 PM

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Standing here acting as if I'm ok.
But really torn and broken.
But who cares anyway.
Feeling of sadness isn't helped by the pity that just causes madness. Words come out but don't seem to mean a thing.
For a second they are real but that's just it.
The words are said but then are,
broken,
Broken like me.


Oh yes, the past can hurt. But, you can either run from it or, learn from it

Each night, when I go to sleep, I die. And the next morning, when I wake up, I am reborn."

- Mahatma Gandhi


Darkness cannot drive out darkness; only light can do that. Hate cannot drive out hate; only love can do that.
Martin Luther King, Jr.


   
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Re: Broken... Thoughts? - January 3rd 2012, 07:21 PM

I really do like it! You did a great job. Keep up the good work!


I got off track I've made mistakes Back slid my way to that place where souls get lost lines get crossed and the pain won't go away.
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Re: Broken... Thoughts? - January 13th 2012, 12:58 PM

This is a great poem and really relatable. Awesome job


And somehow now you're everybody's fool. ~Evanescence
You don't know what it's like to be like me. Welcome to my life. ~Simple Plan
I'm not perfect, but I keep trying. ~Hedley
Maybe we'll turn it around, 'cause it's not too late; it's never too late. ~Three Days Grace

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The best way to get revenge on someone who has hurt you through the years is to smile at them as though you have never cried any tears.
   
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Re: Broken... Thoughts? - January 14th 2012, 04:43 AM

Good job!! I like this a lot! I can really relate to it. Keep it up!



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