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crashing down - January 7th 2012, 05:46 PM

how do you live
when your life is in suspension?
feeling like your dying
looking down on yourself
hoping for an answer
watching your every move
until your ready to burst
crying your heart out
feel like your life is spiraling down
the weight of the world
crushes you
hurts you
makes you want to die
but how can you want to die
if your already dead?

what do you think? it just how i feel right now


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Re: crashing down - January 7th 2012, 11:10 PM

I like this! I could feel the emotion. I especially liked the first two lines.


Sing, the last thing on your mind
The last word on your breath
I'll be the one to keep you
I'll keep you at your best



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Re: crashing down - January 8th 2012, 12:30 PM

The last two lines are very chilling! Nice poem! Keep writing.




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Re: crashing down - January 8th 2012, 06:10 PM

thank you guys so much i really appreciate it.


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