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I'll be okay...
 Outside, huh? ********** 
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I Must Sleep -
January 17th 2012, 01:43 AM
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I am nothing more than an open book
But there's nothing left to my story Nobody sees through the lies on the pages The blood stains on the paper of various ages My words are written in the blood seeping from my veins All of the worry disappears as I write in red I am fighting a losing battle I can't see anymore, hear, or feel Everything is now a blur Are you fading away now? I cannot seem to reach you, cannot pull you close And suddenly you are there for me, holding my hand Healing the wounds that will never be able to mend I think that I must sleep now Don't try to wake me None of your pleading will shake me The darkness is falling, faster, faster I am losing my mind, faster, faster There is nothing left now, I have lost the war I think that I must sleep now Forevermore Sing, the last thing on your mind The last word on your breath I'll be the one to keep you I'll keep you at your best  Self Expression Forum Mod 4/23/12 |
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I'll be okay...
Outside, huh? **********
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January 17th 2012, 01:51 AM
Really? Thank you so much.
Sing, the last thing on your mind The last word on your breath I'll be the one to keep you I'll keep you at your best Self Expression Forum Mod 4/23/12 |
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Re: I Must Sleep -
January 25th 2012, 06:45 PM
Wow, this is amazing!!
I love the repetition and the stanzas flow nicely together. "When my life is like a storm
Rising waters all I want is the shore You say I'll be ok And make it through the rain" --Addison Road Hope Now "On the outside all we see is clay that hides the perfect lie, No one really knows the pain inside." --7th Day Slumber Missing Pages LiveHelp Operator 12/15/11-1/27/12 HelpLink Mentor 1/27/12 Articles team 3/31/12 PM / VM anytime! |
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I'll be okay...
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January 25th 2012, 09:21 PM
Thanks. <3 I appreciate it.
Sing, the last thing on your mind The last word on your breath I'll be the one to keep you I'll keep you at your best Self Expression Forum Mod 4/23/12 |
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Re: I Must Sleep -
January 25th 2012, 09:41 PM
Very discriptive and powerful! Goodjob!
Some things are beautiful because they are un-obtainable <3
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January 25th 2012, 10:14 PM
WOW i just wow
Used to be Misslostintears
If you ever want to talk or something, i am always here. I've been around for a while now. " I TRIED SO HARD, AND GOT SO FAR, BUT IN THE END, IT DOESNT EVEN MATTER I HAD TO FALL TO LOSE IT ALL, BUT IN THE END, IT DOESNT EVEN MATTER" -Linkin Park IN MY FEILD OF PAPER FLOWERS, AND CANDY CLOUDS OF LULLIBIES, I LAY INSIDE MYSELF FOR HOURS, AND WATCH MY PURPLE SKIES FLY OVER ME - |
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January 26th 2012, 12:42 AM
Wow, This is amazing!!
 I like it. Good job!
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Re: I Must Sleep -
January 26th 2012, 05:50 AM
wow, that was incredible it flows so well. i agree with 13reasonswhy it's one of the best poems i've ever read. keep up the good work...hope to read more of your writings
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I'll be okay...
Outside, huh? **********
Name: Desiree or Dez
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January 26th 2012, 10:11 AM
Wow, and I didn't think this was that good at first.
Sing, the last thing on your mind The last word on your breath I'll be the one to keep you I'll keep you at your best Self Expression Forum Mod 4/23/12 |
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January 26th 2012, 10:35 PM
I love it! Great job!
 I got off track I've made mistakes Back slid my way to that place where souls get lost lines get crossed and the pain won't go away. R.I.P. Tatyana Sawka June 20, 1998- April 9, 2012 |
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