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A Flower Blooms -
January 20th 2012, 08:13 PM
A Flower Blooms
In this dark and hellish hour in this empty room grows a single blooming flower With torn and painted roots It's beauty it entranced me and it made me want to cry cause even though the room was death I knew it'd never die It's petals shown like crystal and the leaves they looked of lace and i wondered why such beauty was here in such a place flower
hello my heart where have you been I missed you when you left you ran away with that senseless boy and left me dim and dry like a faded flower in the mist Come back my heart. you have a home here In this place that is my soul I want to feel like whole again. don't waste your time with him Have faith my heart. You'll get a second chance come back to me and you will not be alone |
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Re: A Flower Blooms -
January 21st 2012, 12:15 PM
Wow! This is beautiful and flows wonderfully!! I really enjoyed this piece, especially this part:
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![]() Truly a wonderful poem! I hope you'll continue writing! I'd love to see more from you! My DeviantArt [Originally Joined: April 2010 Staff Member Since: June 2010] LGBT Forum Mod Self-Expression Forum Mod Live Help Operator |
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Re: A Flower Blooms -
January 21st 2012, 05:18 PM
Thank you. I try.
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hello my heart where have you been I missed you when you left you ran away with that senseless boy and left me dim and dry like a faded flower in the mist Come back my heart. you have a home here In this place that is my soul I want to feel like whole again. don't waste your time with him Have faith my heart. You'll get a second chance come back to me and you will not be alone |
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