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A Flower Blooms - January 20th 2012, 08:13 PM

A Flower Blooms

In this dark and hellish hour
in this empty room
grows a single blooming flower
With torn and painted roots
It's beauty it entranced me
and it made me want to cry
cause even though the room was death
I knew it'd never die

It's petals shown like crystal
and the leaves they looked of lace
and i wondered why such beauty
was here in such a place


flower
hello my heart where have you been
I missed you when you left
you ran away with that senseless boy
and left me dim and dry
like a faded flower in the mist

Come back my heart. you have a home here
In this place that is my soul
I want to feel like whole again. don't waste your time with him

Have faith my heart. You'll get a second chance
come back to me and you will not be alone
   
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Re: A Flower Blooms - January 21st 2012, 08:20 AM

Love it, keep up the good writing.


   
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Re: A Flower Blooms - January 21st 2012, 12:15 PM

Wow! This is beautiful and flows wonderfully!! I really enjoyed this piece, especially this part:

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cause even though the room was death
I knew it'd never die
That really stuck out to me.

Truly a wonderful poem! I hope you'll continue writing! I'd love to see more from you!




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Re: A Flower Blooms - January 21st 2012, 05:18 PM

Thank you. I try.


flower
hello my heart where have you been
I missed you when you left
you ran away with that senseless boy
and left me dim and dry
like a faded flower in the mist

Come back my heart. you have a home here
In this place that is my soul
I want to feel like whole again. don't waste your time with him

Have faith my heart. You'll get a second chance
come back to me and you will not be alone
   
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