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Those Words (First Poem in a long time) -
January 21st 2012, 05:10 AM
Those Words
With love's blind eye My sight is true My truth be told For only you Ease my soul Play lover's role This goal I seek But dare not speak Those words.... This lover's heart As full each day Beats blissfully Cannot be stayed There is no jest In words that rest On tongue that's tied With eyes that cried Those words... If heaven's truth Revealed with time Gives hope that's bold Of love's sublime Sweet witness for My soul's true core Thus owned by you As if you knew Those words.... In my heart's dreams As real as life When passions play Embraced by night A space we share This love lives there And draws us near So hearts can hear Those words.... And when sun's light Brings forth each day The dream still real In every way I play the role If truth be told With heart still breaking And wet palms shaking Since still instead I've never said Those words.....  15 Straight - Loving Life - Love meeting new peeps - Want to help if I can   Girl: "My doctor says I can't have sex for a while." Boy: "What does your dentist say?" |
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Re: Those Words (First Poem in a long time) -
January 21st 2012, 12:18 PM
This is a gorgeous piece with a lot of emotion. You're a very good writer and I do hope you'll keep it up!!
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January 21st 2012, 05:05 PM
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Thanks for the nice comments Kylie. I guess I'm glad the emotion came through. I've been getting more and more down because of being grounded and having so much time to think about this girl and how I feel. I started crying and writing and this is what came out. Thanks for reading it. 15 Straight - Loving Life - Love meeting new peeps - Want to help if I can Girl: "My doctor says I can't have sex for a while." Boy: "What does your dentist say?" |
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