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Stupid Snow Clouds - January 21st 2012, 05:16 PM

Stupid Snow Clouds

Stupid snow clouds I'm now irate
Stupid snow clouds I guess I'll wait
For you to stop barfing fluffy white
On this a Saturday

I want to see my friend today but all I ever see
Is stupid snow clouds clogging roads
And with my friend I'll never be.

Stupid snow clouds I wish you'd explode
And get eaten by a monster
With far too many toes

Stupid snow clouds- GO AWAY!
Please ruin my life some other day.


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hello my heart where have you been
I missed you when you left
you ran away with that senseless boy
and left me dim and dry
like a faded flower in the mist

Come back my heart. you have a home here
In this place that is my soul
I want to feel like whole again. don't waste your time with him

Have faith my heart. You'll get a second chance
come back to me and you will not be alone
   
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Re: Stupid Snow Clouds - January 21st 2012, 08:03 PM

I like the way you wrote this. Good job, keep it up.


   
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Re: Stupid Snow Clouds - January 22nd 2012, 12:03 AM

i love snow, but this is a really good poem


username used to be snowstorm

promises mean everything,
but once they're broken,
sorry means nothing.

Ill be fine, I swear..... Im just Gone Beyond Repair
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Repose en Paix, Mrs. Radoye♥ ~April 24, 2012~
   
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Re: Stupid Snow Clouds - January 22nd 2012, 02:20 PM

I can really relate to that right now!! We got our first real snow of the season yesterday! It's terrible!

Nice poem, though!!




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