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Forever to wonder (Story) -
January 21st 2012, 06:14 PM
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He did not know he would never talk to her again. Not until he had read the letter. She had planned a way out and he was the only person she could trust. Reading that letter made him shocked, how could she have felt that way? He made a run for her home, not knowing he would not make it in time. Getting to her house door he sees it just a tiny bit open. He pushes the door wide open, walks in wnd then closes it. Everything seemed fine in the kitchen but he knew he should be looking somewhere else. Going through the living room, he shivers as he reaches the stairway. The stairs made a rickory sound from the sudden weight of him, anouncing to anyone upstairs that he was coming up. There was still no sound. He looked into the first room,only to find it empty. Walking over to the next room, he opened that door only to find it also empty. Turning to the last door, the bathroom, he grabbed the handle. It was locked. Remembering a key on the bed of the second room, he went and grabbed it. Putting the key into the lock he twisted it open. The bathroom seemed empty but he knew in the back of his mind that this was where she was. Heading over to the closed shower curtain, he pulled it aside to see the tub fill with red water. In the water was the tiny body her. Not caring if he got wet, he picked up her limped body and held her as he started to hltear up. On her arm was a huge cut that was causing her to bleed out. His friend had tried to kill herself, and had accomplished just that. He wondered why she did it as he ran down the stairs, hoping he could save her. In the end, he will have forever to wonder.
Used to be Misslostintears
If you ever want to talk or something, i am always here. I've been around for a while now. " I TRIED SO HARD, AND GOT SO FAR, BUT IN THE END, IT DOESNT EVEN MATTER I HAD TO FALL TO LOSE IT ALL, BUT IN THE END, IT DOESNT EVEN MATTER" -Linkin Park IN MY FEILD OF PAPER FLOWERS, AND CANDY CLOUDS OF LULLIBIES, I LAY INSIDE MYSELF FOR HOURS, AND WATCH MY PURPLE SKIES FLY OVER ME - |
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Re: Forever to wonder (Story) -
January 21st 2012, 06:48 PM
This is the one I've read before, isn't it? I can still imagine it.
Sing, the last thing on your mind The last word on your breath I'll be the one to keep you I'll keep you at your best  Self Expression Forum Mod 4/23/12 |
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Re: Forever to wonder (Story) -
January 21st 2012, 07:33 PM
Yeah i made you read this
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If you ever want to talk or something, i am always here. I've been around for a while now. " I TRIED SO HARD, AND GOT SO FAR, BUT IN THE END, IT DOESNT EVEN MATTER I HAD TO FALL TO LOSE IT ALL, BUT IN THE END, IT DOESNT EVEN MATTER" -Linkin Park IN MY FEILD OF PAPER FLOWERS, AND CANDY CLOUDS OF LULLIBIES, I LAY INSIDE MYSELF FOR HOURS, AND WATCH MY PURPLE SKIES FLY OVER ME - |
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Re: Forever to wonder (Story) -
January 22nd 2012, 02:24 PM
This is a very sad story, but it is beautifully written. Your style of writing really makes the reader feel as though they are there, which is the goal of any good writing.
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Re: Forever to wonder (Story) -
January 25th 2012, 10:44 AM
I remember loving it when I did read it.
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Re: Forever to wonder (Story) -
January 29th 2012, 05:58 PM
Thank you. It has another part. The girl part but im to lazy to rewrite on the computer
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If you ever want to talk or something, i am always here. I've been around for a while now. " I TRIED SO HARD, AND GOT SO FAR, BUT IN THE END, IT DOESNT EVEN MATTER I HAD TO FALL TO LOSE IT ALL, BUT IN THE END, IT DOESNT EVEN MATTER" -Linkin Park IN MY FEILD OF PAPER FLOWERS, AND CANDY CLOUDS OF LULLIBIES, I LAY INSIDE MYSELF FOR HOURS, AND WATCH MY PURPLE SKIES FLY OVER ME - |
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