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Vices - Pt. 1 - January 24th 2012, 03:52 AM

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Hello TH. With not recording as much, not working as fucking much (lol), and settling down into a routine of life. I'll be able to come here more often. So, yeah

Eyes closed, throat sore, and hiccups making her head rock
You can see the glow of the joint, she can't stop
Life's in lock, feels lost, still stuck in this pot
She's been swimming in since the last time she looked at the clock
Contradiction, is killing her slowly
Trying to forget she needs a new filling for holy
Feeling lonely, her cieling is folding
Reaching for her soul she's leaping for her soul
She tries to feel whole but feels nothing but a hole
In her heart and mind, cutting every single string of hope
Still trying to cope over the fact she needs to cope
Bleeds for hope, needs more than dope, to feel her cloak
She needs to find out how to free her quotes
Or else no ones gonna listen and her creed becomes a scapegoat
But even if you knew her, you wouldn't even know
'Cause the mask she wears misleads you to think she glows

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Re: Vices - Pt. 1 - January 25th 2012, 06:00 PM

I like this.


"Ignore the ramblings of the ignorant, and step on or over their crumpled bodies as you make your way to the top of the mountain. Eat upon their flesh for fuel, and, through your determination and will, banish them to obscurity and a life of complacency and self righteousness that is the hell in which they live"

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Re: Vices - Pt. 1 - January 31st 2012, 07:42 PM

this is really good


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promises mean everything,
but once they're broken,
sorry means nothing.

Ill be fine, I swear..... Im just Gone Beyond Repair
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Repose en Paix, Mrs. Radoye♥ ~April 24, 2012~
   
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Re: Vices - Pt. 1 - January 31st 2012, 11:28 PM

This is faacking good man, I like it a lot lol.
Can definitely relate to it. Nice job (:
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Re: Vices - Pt. 1 - February 1st 2012, 12:11 AM

Interesting, very interesting. But i thought it didn't flow as smoothly.


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