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Name: Kristina
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Look and what do you see. -
January 24th 2012, 09:04 AM
Look up to the sky and what do you see? Darkness, like a never ending hole. If something were to happen would you choose to flee? Or would you stand up to it and fight it like a hero? Look forward to the distance and what do you see? The sun that is hiding from your sight. If it were to disappear and not answer to your plea. Would you search for it with all of your might? Look down to the ground and what do you see? The cold hard floor with a hole so deep. If it were to get wider and deeper than your knee. Would you find a way out or just stay and weep? Look around you and what do you see? A world that is filled with evil and hate If tomorrow were to be the day that you would lose me, Would you try to save me or just say it’s fate? "While I thought that I was learning how to live, I have been learning how to die." -Leonardo Da Vinci "How many times can i say i'm not sorry? And how many ways can i show i don't care?" - Type O Negative "I know, i'll die that night. And i won't be brought back to life. i know." - AFI "Giving up is really about honoring your feelings. It's about giving up trying to force yourself into a mold of societal shoulds and embracing your true self." - Dan DeVille |
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Re: Look and what do you see. -
January 24th 2012, 11:21 AM
Hey Kristina!
You did a really good job on this poem. I really love it. I'm glad to see you found a positive way to express your thoughts and feelings. Keep up the great writing! 
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