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Invisible - January 24th 2012, 06:25 PM

Standing alone is easier.
You don't get your feelings hurt.
No one can break your trust.
So here I"ll stand.
Invisible to all.
My emotions breaking down.
Slowly first, then faster.
No one to trust, no one can help.
So here I'll stay invisible.
Unknown to all.
   
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Re: Invisible - January 25th 2012, 06:05 PM

You are visible now.

This reminded me of a pic I once saw of a man sitting on a mountain, alone, as if he had just conquered the world but no one would ever know what he had done.


"Ignore the ramblings of the ignorant, and step on or over their crumpled bodies as you make your way to the top of the mountain. Eat upon their flesh for fuel, and, through your determination and will, banish them to obscurity and a life of complacency and self righteousness that is the hell in which they live"

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Re: Invisible - January 25th 2012, 08:52 PM

This is such a great read. I love the length of the poem. IT's perfect for this piece.
   
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Re: Invisible - January 26th 2012, 06:42 PM

Thank you, Dinosaur Trainer it's nice to know someone sees me even if it isn't in person. writing says more about the person in my opinion. Thanks Autumn wind, I love hearing that my poems are good. Most of the time I feel like there just thoughts strung together more than anything else. Posting them is like a relief to me, and sense I can't get on the computer at home I can't go on the site I used to for poems.
   
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Re: Invisible - January 26th 2012, 10:38 PM

Wow, this is really great! Keep it up!


I got off track I've made mistakes Back slid my way to that place where souls get lost lines get crossed and the pain won't go away.
R.I.P. Tatyana Sawka June 20, 1998- April 9, 2012
   
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Re: Invisible - January 27th 2012, 01:59 AM

I love this. Not only is that basically my life, it's just... that it speaks to what I know. (Reading it I saw me.... damn, I'm a loser <3)-[Saying that in the 'I'm-totally-awesome' way)


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Re: Invisible - January 27th 2012, 10:30 AM

A perfect explanation to my feelings right now. Thank you for posting and awesome job on it


And somehow now you're everybody's fool. ~Evanescence
You don't know what it's like to be like me. Welcome to my life. ~Simple Plan
I'm not perfect, but I keep trying. ~Hedley
Maybe we'll turn it around, 'cause it's not too late; it's never too late. ~Three Days Grace

Nothing's ever easy, and if it is, you're not trying hard enough.
The best way to get revenge on someone who has hurt you through the years is to smile at them as though you have never cried any tears.
   
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Re: Invisible - January 27th 2012, 06:00 PM

Thank you guys actually, seeing I'm good at something makes days a bit easier for me. and George, if my peom describes your life you are not a loser, your just like me.
   
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Re: Invisible - January 27th 2012, 09:24 PM

thank you for this good read
   
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Re: Invisible - January 29th 2012, 03:19 AM

This is a good read, the perfect length!


Sing, the last thing on your mind
The last word on your breath
I'll be the one to keep you
I'll keep you at your best



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