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Vices - Pt. 2 -
January 25th 2012, 09:00 AM
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You can see it in his eyes when he talks about his father
A gentle suicide is all he can recall He gets through it by forming red lines under his eyelids With the snow he lets melt in his nose so he can to stop cryin' He stops trying to find an answer to live life So he grabs another potent rock of ice so he can drown in his vice, crown the sacrifice down in paradise where the proud is just a parasite And he doesn't know why life has to be this cut and dry He tries to deny he relies on being high But he'd rather die than defy what keeps him alive He walks blind into the shadow of death feeling just fine Everything is numb, and he can hardly open his eyes But he still staggers into the unforgiving night When they found him, he had nothing but a smile It looked as if he dreamed of this for years, and it was just time |
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Re: Vices - Pt. 2 -
January 25th 2012, 06:19 PM
I enjoy your work.
 Where do you get your inspiration? (If it's obvious I'm sorry.  )
"Ignore the ramblings of the ignorant, and step on or over their crumpled bodies as you make your way to the top of the mountain. Eat upon their flesh for fuel, and, through your determination and will, banish them to obscurity and a life of complacency and self righteousness that is the hell in which they live"
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Re: Vices - Pt. 2 -
January 25th 2012, 08:49 PM
I get most of my inspiration from people in general. Seeing people on the street, watching what happens in the news, people around me, and myself.
A lot of who I mention, (Like the girl in Vices Pt. 1. And the guy in Vices Pt. 2.), isn't just one person. It's a mixture of people who have the same problems put into 1 person with a few key aspects / personalities given to my character. And, lil, you should totally read all my poetry on my facebook. I have about 2 full days worth, lol 
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I'll be okay...
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Re: Vices - Pt. 2 -
January 29th 2012, 03:28 AM
I've really loved all your writing so far. This is really amazing.
Sing, the last thing on your mind The last word on your breath I'll be the one to keep you I'll keep you at your best  Self Expression Forum Mod 4/23/12 |
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Re: Vices - Pt. 2 -
January 31st 2012, 07:41 PM
i love this
username used to be snowstorm promises mean everything, but once they're broken, sorry means nothing. Ill be fine, I swear..... Im just Gone Beyond Repair -Mayday Parade Repose en Paix, Mrs. Radoye♥ ~April 24, 2012~ |
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Re: Vices - Pt. 2 -
February 1st 2012, 12:14 AM
Now this, I liked
Very strong, goodjob!! Everything flowed like a stream Some things are beautiful because they are un-obtainable <3
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