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Goodbye -
January 25th 2012, 03:24 PM
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Water is rushing,
I fight to get through but it just gets deeper. I feel myself drowing and know there is nothing I can do. Maybe I'll just let myself go. That sounds like the right thing to do. No one has heard my cries before, why would they now? No fighting or screaming, just one last quite goodbye. |
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Re: Goodbye -
January 25th 2012, 06:21 PM
You use some powerful imagery.
 Things will get better, if this is meant to be responded to. 
"Ignore the ramblings of the ignorant, and step on or over their crumpled bodies as you make your way to the top of the mountain. Eat upon their flesh for fuel, and, through your determination and will, banish them to obscurity and a life of complacency and self righteousness that is the hell in which they live"
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January 26th 2012, 10:32 PM
It is really good. If it helps you cope, then keep writing. You're really good.
 I got off track I've made mistakes Back slid my way to that place where souls get lost lines get crossed and the pain won't go away. R.I.P. Tatyana Sawka June 20, 1998- April 9, 2012 |
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Re: Goodbye -
January 29th 2012, 03:26 AM
This is really great, keep writing.
Sing, the last thing on your mind The last word on your breath I'll be the one to keep you I'll keep you at your best  Self Expression Forum Mod 4/23/12 |
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