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Just a bit of how it feels... - January 26th 2012, 07:46 AM

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Nice and slow, savouring each ounce of pain. Savouring each bittersweet scarlet drop.

Watching my life pour from my wrists, wishing life could be as simple as this.

Deeper each time, trying to immortalize the memory with something so tantalizing.

Feel the rush in my veins, watching the razor draw sweet scarlet art across my body.

Never taking my eyes off it for a minute, wanting it so bad I become addicted.

The feel of the metallic mixed with my life force, becoming a somewhat hazy drug.

Becoming lost in its effects, not realizing that you've left everyhthing behind now, but you just can't stop.

Wanting it all to be easier, wanting it all to end. Wanting these memories to fade with the scars.

The last scarlet drop hts the floor, this last silent tear will scream no more.


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Re: Just a bit of how it feels... - January 26th 2012, 10:14 AM

I really love this. It is well written and I can feel what is being felt, good job!


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Re: Just a bit of how it feels... - January 26th 2012, 02:16 PM

Thanks I'm glad you liked it, not many people like how I write.


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Re: Just a bit of how it feels... - January 26th 2012, 03:28 PM

Really love it.
I can relate to it.


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Re: Just a bit of how it feels... - January 27th 2012, 05:53 AM

Thanks means a lot


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Re: Just a bit of how it feels... - January 29th 2012, 06:12 AM

i really liked it. i could relate. good work. i hope to read more of your work.
   
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Re: Just a bit of how it feels... - January 30th 2012, 11:50 AM

Thank you and you definately will see more of my work.


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Re: Just a bit of how it feels... - January 30th 2012, 12:24 PM

I can relate as well, you packed lots of emotion in there. Very well done



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Re: Just a bit of how it feels... - February 2nd 2012, 04:44 AM

I really like this. Good job!
I can completely relate.
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Re: Just a bit of how it feels... - February 2nd 2012, 05:54 AM

Thanks guys means heaps
And I definateely will keep writing


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