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My Everything (A Poem) - January 26th 2012, 10:32 PM

My Everything.

My hearts breaking,
I can’t breath.
I’m in love with you.
Just tell me you are too,
With me.
That’s all I want.


My hearts breaking,
My heart just can’t seem to beat,
Whenever I’m around you.
I’m head over heels,
In love with you.
Just tell me you are too.

My hearts breaking,
I can’t seem to sleep.
My mind’s favorite subject is you.
I can’t stop thinking,
Of how much I want to hold you,
Kiss you,
Touch you.
Just tell me, you feel the same.

My hearts breaking,
I can’t seem to think.
I can’t concentrate.
I think the vaccine for this feeling
Is you.
Just tell me, you need me too.

My hearts breaking,
I can’t function.
This feeling is my everything.
My inspiration. My muse.
For this poem,
And for the song in my heart.
Just tell me you feel the same.

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Okay, embarrassing, but I'm in love with someone... I don't need to ask them to know, that's it's just me. ^^ I'm listening to Kurt Hummel sing "I Want To Hold Your Hand", that kind of brought it up.


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Re: My Everything (A Poem) - January 26th 2012, 10:33 PM

Awe it is so sweet! You're really good at writing. Keep it up!


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Re: My Everything (A Poem) - January 26th 2012, 10:43 PM

^^ Thanks. I thought it was stalkerish... (I swear, I'm not a stalker!) Actually, I'm finally getting out of a writers block, Poetry=my life <3


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Re: My Everything (A Poem) - January 26th 2012, 10:53 PM

Don't worry I don't think you are a stalker. lol, I just really like it. I write short stories and poems. You're a really good writer. You should be proud.


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Re: My Everything (A Poem) - January 27th 2012, 01:30 AM

^^ Thanks. It just feels stalker-ish to me. I mean "My mind’s favorite subject is you.", isn't that creepy? I think I should turn to someone and randomly say that. that would be so weird (and completely hilarious!)


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Re: My Everything (A Poem) - January 27th 2012, 03:14 AM

really great poem. good work.
   
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Re: My Everything (A Poem) - January 27th 2012, 03:16 AM

^^ Thanks <3


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Re: My Everything (A Poem) - January 27th 2012, 04:24 AM

Its sweet=) If only she could see it=)


   
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Re: My Everything (A Poem) - January 27th 2012, 08:37 PM

*blushes* Thanks... and thank god that she doesn't. That would be embarrassing (but totally awesome.)


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Re: My Everything (A Poem) - January 28th 2012, 02:42 AM

No it's not creepy, it's sweet! lol, good job!


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Re: My Everything (A Poem) - January 28th 2012, 09:20 PM

^^' Fine, I believe you.


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Re: My Everything (A Poem) - January 29th 2012, 01:22 AM

Aw thank you for believing in me!


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Re: My Everything (A Poem) - January 29th 2012, 02:20 AM

I LOVE IT!


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Re: My Everything (A Poem) - January 29th 2012, 03:10 AM

I like this, it's sweet.


Sing, the last thing on your mind
The last word on your breath
I'll be the one to keep you
I'll keep you at your best



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Re: My Everything (A Poem) - January 31st 2012, 01:34 AM

Thanks Dez ^^


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Re: My Everything (A Poem) - February 1st 2012, 12:25 AM

I like it it's so cute lol


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