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Rainbow Pride.
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My Everything (A Poem) -
January 26th 2012, 10:32 PM
My Everything.
My hearts breaking, I can’t breath. I’m in love with you. Just tell me you are too, With me. That’s all I want. My hearts breaking, My heart just can’t seem to beat, Whenever I’m around you. I’m head over heels, In love with you. Just tell me you are too. My hearts breaking, I can’t seem to sleep. My mind’s favorite subject is you. I can’t stop thinking, Of how much I want to hold you, Kiss you, Touch you. Just tell me, you feel the same. My hearts breaking, I can’t seem to think. I can’t concentrate. I think the vaccine for this feeling Is you. Just tell me, you need me too. My hearts breaking, I can’t function. This feeling is my everything. My inspiration. My muse. For this poem, And for the song in my heart. Just tell me you feel the same. ---- Okay, embarrassing, but I'm in love with someone... I don't need to ask them to know, that's it's just me. ^^ I'm listening to Kurt Hummel sing "I Want To Hold Your Hand", that kind of brought it up. In a world filled with diversity, I am just another oddity.
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Re: My Everything (A Poem) -
January 26th 2012, 10:33 PM
Awe it is so sweet! You're really good at writing. Keep it up!
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Re: My Everything (A Poem) -
January 26th 2012, 10:43 PM
^^ Thanks. I thought it was stalkerish... (I swear, I'm not a stalker!) Actually, I'm finally getting out of a writers block, Poetry=my life <3
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January 26th 2012, 10:53 PM
Don't worry I don't think you are a stalker. lol, I just really like it. I write short stories and poems. You're a really good writer. You should be proud.
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January 27th 2012, 01:30 AM
^^ Thanks. It just feels stalker-ish to me. I mean "My mind’s favorite subject is you.", isn't that creepy? I think I should turn to someone and randomly say that. that would be so weird (and completely hilarious!)
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January 27th 2012, 08:37 PM
*blushes* Thanks... and thank god that she doesn't. That would be embarrassing (but totally awesome.)
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January 28th 2012, 02:42 AM
No it's not creepy, it's sweet! lol, good job!
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Re: My Everything (A Poem) -
January 29th 2012, 01:22 AM
Aw thank you for believing in me!
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I'll be okay...
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Re: My Everything (A Poem) -
January 29th 2012, 03:10 AM
I like this, it's sweet.
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