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A poem made of two songs (explanation inside) - January 27th 2012, 01:27 AM

Warning, you may know the lines, Just telling you, their someone's lyrics (Adele and the beatles) that I thought I'd mix them and make something new. It's a newer thing (can't remember the name of it when you take someone else's work and revise it into something new. for me it was this poem about being in love.
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I heard that your dreams came true
Guess I couldn’t do that for you
Old friend, why are you so shy?
I'll tell you something
I think you'll understand
I hate to turn up out of the blue, uninvited
But I couldn't stay away, I couldn't fight it
Oh please say to me
You'll let me be your man
You know how the time flies
Only yesterday was the time of our lives
It's such a feeling that my love
I can’t hide.
Nothing compares, no worries or cares
I wish nothing but the best for you
Don't forget me, I remember you said
And when I touch you I feel happy inside
I want to hold your hand


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Some lines were slightly changed. No hate, please. I just felt more in these lyrics than I could ever write.


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Re: A poem made of two songs (explanation inside) - January 27th 2012, 01:39 AM

A very cool idea!! I really enjoyed this! You fit the lyrics together extremely well!




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Re: A poem made of two songs (explanation inside) - January 27th 2012, 01:44 AM

^^ Thanks. - actually, after extensive listening to both songs (for reasons other than the fact that they fit together like patrick star and spongebob) it just kind of clicked.

-I've heard about doing this on the radio... but I can't remember much.


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Re: A poem made of two songs (explanation inside) - January 28th 2012, 02:50 AM

Wow! I love this idea! I'll have to try it. You inspire me all of the time!


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Re: A poem made of two songs (explanation inside) - January 28th 2012, 09:24 PM

^^' Thanks. -I'd love to see what you come up with! (PM me it, please? *puppy face


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Re: A poem made of two songs (explanation inside) - January 29th 2012, 01:15 AM

Okay I will, don't worry. I still can't decide what songs I'm going to do yet. But I know it will involve a Rascal Flatts song!


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Re: A poem made of two songs (explanation inside) - January 29th 2012, 02:22 AM

It's a really good idea! I loved it!


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Re: A poem made of two songs (explanation inside) - January 29th 2012, 03:06 AM

This a good idea. I like this, the lyrics went together well.


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