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A poem made of two songs (explanation inside) -
January 27th 2012, 01:27 AM
Warning, you may know the lines, Just telling you, their someone's lyrics (Adele and the beatles) that I thought I'd mix them and make something new. It's a newer thing (can't remember the name of it when you take someone else's work and revise it into something new. for me it was this poem about being in love.
----- I heard that your dreams came true Guess I couldn’t do that for you Old friend, why are you so shy? I'll tell you something I think you'll understand I hate to turn up out of the blue, uninvited But I couldn't stay away, I couldn't fight it Oh please say to me You'll let me be your man You know how the time flies Only yesterday was the time of our lives It's such a feeling that my love I can’t hide. Nothing compares, no worries or cares I wish nothing but the best for you Don't forget me, I remember you said And when I touch you I feel happy inside I want to hold your hand ---- Some lines were slightly changed. No hate, please. I just felt more in these lyrics than I could ever write. In a world filled with diversity, I am just another oddity.
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Re: A poem made of two songs (explanation inside) -
January 27th 2012, 01:39 AM
A very cool idea!!
I really enjoyed this! You fit the lyrics together extremely well!
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Re: A poem made of two songs (explanation inside) -
January 27th 2012, 01:44 AM
^^ Thanks. - actually, after extensive listening to both songs (for reasons other than the fact that they fit together like patrick star and spongebob) it just kind of clicked.
-I've heard about doing this on the radio... but I can't remember much. In a world filled with diversity, I am just another oddity.
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January 28th 2012, 02:50 AM
Wow! I love this idea! I'll have to try it. You inspire me all of the time!
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Re: A poem made of two songs (explanation inside) -
January 28th 2012, 09:24 PM
^^' Thanks. -I'd love to see what you come up with! (PM me it, please? *puppy face
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January 29th 2012, 01:15 AM
Okay I will, don't worry.
I still can't decide what songs I'm going to do yet. But I know it will involve a Rascal Flatts song!
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Re: A poem made of two songs (explanation inside) -
January 29th 2012, 03:06 AM
This a good idea. I like this, the lyrics went together well.
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