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Hurt - January 29th 2012, 07:24 PM

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Do you want to watch me slowly die?
Do you want to see the pain I've gone through all my life?
Do you want to watch me as I drown in my regret and hate?
Your once love filled eyes are now nothing but empty shells
As they stare at me, finally seeing the true person I am
You see nothing but cuts, scars and tears
Why can't you see me as the person you used to hold so close and love
You used to think I was like something from above
But now you see I'm just something that crawled up from hell
Trying to escape this unbearable life
I dropped the knife for you, I saw the pain it caused
But now there's more to the story, and you don't want to share
You've closed the door that led from my heart to yours
Now all I feel is the cold empty space inside of me
Why did I let you be so important?
Didn't I learn from before..
You just can't trust anyone not to leave anymore.


Meh, needed an outlet.


Be who you are and say what you feel because those who mind don’t matter and those who matter don’t mind.


"Live your life and risk it all
take some chances, take the fall
take your time, no need to hurry
have some fun, and never worry ♥"

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Re: Hurt - January 29th 2012, 07:30 PM

I really like this. I could feel the emotions in it. This is a good outlet, keep writing.


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Re: Hurt - January 29th 2012, 09:37 PM

This is good! I like it. Keep writing!



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Re: Hurt - January 29th 2012, 11:48 PM

Thank you both
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Be who you are and say what you feel because those who mind don’t matter and those who matter don’t mind.


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take your time, no need to hurry
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Re: Hurt - February 8th 2012, 11:13 PM

Wow. This is really amazing. I could image everything happening in my head like i was the person. Very nice and I can relate.
   
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Re: Hurt - February 9th 2012, 01:52 PM

Thank you, I'm sorry to hear you can relate..it can be painful but I hope you get through it <33


Be who you are and say what you feel because those who mind don’t matter and those who matter don’t mind.


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take some chances, take the fall
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Re: Hurt - February 10th 2012, 09:49 PM

This is really amazing! Great job! Keep it up!


I got off track I've made mistakes Back slid my way to that place where souls get lost lines get crossed and the pain won't go away.
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Re: Hurt - February 10th 2012, 10:25 PM

Thanks brokensmilexx
   
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