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Unhappy A Song. - January 30th 2012, 01:31 AM

In her hands she holds the scars
Of every time she fell apart
Shes a fragile thing
With broken wings
Forever bound to the dark

She finds shelter in the rain
Only to uncover pain
She can breathe at night
But when the light
Returns, she's still in chains

It's not done. But what do you think?


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Where it's easier than this
And you see outside yourself
And you buy the hole you'll fill
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Re: A Song. - January 30th 2012, 03:49 AM

I love it so far, can't wait to see the finished product as well as any other writings of yours!


   
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Re: A Song. - January 30th 2012, 08:52 AM

Wow, this is beautiful and very well-written! Keep at it, and if you want to record the finished product and post it here, we'd certainly love to hear it sung!




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Re: A Song. - January 31st 2012, 03:15 AM

Wow! you did a very good job writing this. I love it so far.



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Re: A Song. - February 1st 2012, 12:24 AM

Describe her surroundings


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Re: A Song. - February 1st 2012, 10:55 PM

Thats a brilliant start!Cant wait to see it finished.
   
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Re: A Song. - February 2nd 2012, 12:02 AM

I really like it! Can't wait to read the rest


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Re: A Song. - February 2nd 2012, 01:35 AM

Thanks that means a lot to me, all of you I'll keep working on it, I'll post the rest when I'm done.


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Re: A Song. - February 2nd 2012, 10:42 PM

Wow I love it! Great job. I can't wait to read the finished piece!


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