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Song-Turn Back The Clock - February 1st 2012, 11:09 PM

This is a song I wrote called Turn Back The Clock.Tell me what you think guys.


Have you ever took the time to turn back the clock
And think where did normal go?
Cos you can wait forever for bad to become good
And then lose out to those private battles.

So turn back the clock
And don't you ever doubt me
Because I will be that voice
When your in need of someone to talk to.

Go and get out there
Chase that spark
And find the real you that's inside
Then you won't just be a light in the dark.

Your hurtin but I can feel you crying
Cos you must feel like your living in a warzone
Battered and confused
And always feeling bruised.

So turn back the clock
And dont't you ever doubt me
Because I will be that voice
When your in need of someone to talk to.

But I gotta say...

It takes courage to be different
But you'll never know what its like
To be heard
If you dont step outside and turn back the clock.
   
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Re: Song-Turn Back The Clock - February 1st 2012, 11:41 PM

YYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEES SSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS
   
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Re: Song-Turn Back The Clock - February 1st 2012, 11:44 PM

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YYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEES SSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS
haha,thanks Cassidy lol
   
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Re: Song-Turn Back The Clock - February 2nd 2012, 12:00 AM

I absolutely love your song! Do you plan on putting music to it? That would be amazing


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Maybe we'll turn it around, 'cause it's not too late; it's never too late. ~Three Days Grace

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Re: Song-Turn Back The Clock - February 2nd 2012, 12:22 AM

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I absolutely love your song! Do you plan on putting music to it? That would be amazing
Thank you,means alot nah,i dont plan on doing that,sorry to dissapoint lol
   
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Re: Song-Turn Back The Clock - February 2nd 2012, 10:43 PM

Wow I'm in love with this! Great job!



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Re: Song-Turn Back The Clock - February 2nd 2012, 11:04 PM

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Wow I'm in love with this! Great job!
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Re: Song-Turn Back The Clock - February 3rd 2012, 12:04 AM

You're very welcome!



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Re: Song-Turn Back The Clock - February 3rd 2012, 01:11 AM

I like this a lot!


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Re: Song-Turn Back The Clock - February 3rd 2012, 03:45 PM

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Re: Song-Turn Back The Clock - February 3rd 2012, 04:37 PM

I definitely like the idea behind the song.
You have some talent there, young man!
Put it to good use. You should totally add some music to it.
Keep it up!


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Re: Song-Turn Back The Clock - February 3rd 2012, 04:46 PM

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I definitely like the idea behind the song.
You have some talent there, young man!
Put it to good use. You should totally add some music to it.
Keep it up!
Thanks a mil! I will keep on writing,dont worry
   
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Re: Song-Turn Back The Clock - February 3rd 2012, 08:29 PM

I like it You're good at writing lyrics, which I think is a really cool thing to be good at Do you play anything? Or sing?


You believe there's somewhere else
Where it's easier than this
And you see outside yourself
And you buy the hole you'll fill
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Re: Song-Turn Back The Clock - February 3rd 2012, 08:49 PM

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I like it You're good at writing lyrics, which I think is a really cool thing to be good at Do you play anything? Or sing?
Thank you! and no i dont play anything/sing....
   
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