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Song-Turn Back The Clock -
February 1st 2012, 11:09 PM
This is a song I wrote called Turn Back The Clock.Tell me what you think guys.
![]() Have you ever took the time to turn back the clock And think where did normal go? Cos you can wait forever for bad to become good And then lose out to those private battles. So turn back the clock And don't you ever doubt me Because I will be that voice When your in need of someone to talk to. Go and get out there Chase that spark And find the real you that's inside Then you won't just be a light in the dark. Your hurtin but I can feel you crying Cos you must feel like your living in a warzone Battered and confused And always feeling bruised. So turn back the clock And dont't you ever doubt me Because I will be that voice When your in need of someone to talk to. But I gotta say... It takes courage to be different But you'll never know what its like To be heard If you dont step outside and turn back the clock. |
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Re: Song-Turn Back The Clock -
February 2nd 2012, 12:00 AM
I absolutely love your song! Do you plan on putting music to it? That would be amazing
And somehow now you're everybody's fool. ~Evanescence
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Re: Song-Turn Back The Clock -
February 2nd 2012, 10:43 PM
Wow I'm in love with this! Great job!
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Re: Song-Turn Back The Clock -
February 3rd 2012, 12:04 AM
You're very welcome!
![]() I got off track I've made mistakes Back slid my way to that place where souls get lost lines get crossed and the pain won't go away. R.I.P. Tatyana Sawka June 20, 1998- April 9, 2012 |
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Re: Song-Turn Back The Clock -
February 3rd 2012, 01:11 AM
I like this a lot!
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Re: Song-Turn Back The Clock -
February 3rd 2012, 04:37 PM
I definitely like the idea behind the song.
You have some talent there, young man! ![]() Put it to good use. You should totally add some music to it. Keep it up! ~Through the wind and the rain She stands hard as a stone In a world that she can't rise above But her dreams give her wings And she flies to a place where she's loved. Concrete Angel. If you ever need to talk, I'm here for you! My PM box is always open! (: Make no mistake, every prayer you pray gets answered. Even though, sometimes, the answer, is no. . . ![]() HelpLINK Mentor - 2.4.2011 LiveHelp Operator - 18.6.2011 |
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Re: Song-Turn Back The Clock -
February 3rd 2012, 08:29 PM
I like it
You're good at writing lyrics, which I think is a really cool thing to be good at Do you play anything? Or sing?
You believe there's somewhere else
Where it's easier than this And you see outside yourself And you buy the hole you'll fill -Foo Fighters |
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