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Liza's Song -
February 2nd 2012, 01:59 AM
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We walk such a fragile thread
The borderline of life and death There is not way for us to choose And this is where it breaks for you The worst part is what's left behind Hidden answers we can't find Buried with the stolen years The promises that disappeared And why would heaven take the life of someone, someone like you? CHORUS You were so innocent Who could say that you deserved this? No one knows there answers to The questions on our lips All of the years ahead You'll never have your fair chance to live We will spend them hoping that It all was for the best The empty space where you should be Will remind us constantly Time will heal and hurt will fade But memories won't go away And why would heaven take the life of someone, someone like you? CHORUS It all was for, it all was for the best It's so easy to forget We're never guaranteed another breath Another breath CHORUS This is never what we'd choose But this is where it breaks for you .... That's it. It about a 10 yr old girl I knew who died a couple years ago. It was so sad  . What did you think about the song??? Constructive criticism is welcone, and any suggestions you may have. 
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Re: Liza's Song -
February 2nd 2012, 11:58 AM
I think it's amazing.
A remarkable attempt.  Keep up the good work.  ~Mandy xx PS: Dunno about constructive criticism, as I never tried song writing and all. 
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February 2nd 2012, 10:08 PM
Aw thanks
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Re: Liza's Song -
February 3rd 2012, 12:39 AM
Oh I am in love with this. It has so much emotion. Great job!
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