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Memory...kind of a suicide note written as a poem - February 2nd 2012, 09:28 PM

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Memory

I sit here and think,
How life can be lost in a blink,
By accident, on purpose, or sadly by one's own hand,
People wonder and sometimes never understand,
How someone could be in so much pain,
And feel so inane,
That they take their own life away,
For they felt nothing would ever be okay,
That they had no purpose,
That they were worthless,
As if they had no meaning in life,
And were simply causing nothing but strife,
At least that's how I feel,
And soon enough what I feel will no longer be real,
It will be just another memory of me,
And what will never be,
I leave you this to think on,
So you'll have understanding when I'm gone,
Now just remember I LOVE YOU!
And nothing will ever make that untrue,
So for now it's goodbye,
But please don't cry,
We will meet again,
But untill we do carry my memory within.
   
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Re: Memory...kind of a suicide note written as a poem - February 2nd 2012, 10:35 PM

Aw, I really like this. I'm sorry you feel this way. I could feel all of the emotion in the piece of writing.


I got off track I've made mistakes Back slid my way to that place where souls get lost lines get crossed and the pain won't go away.
R.I.P. Tatyana Sawka June 20, 1998- April 9, 2012
   
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Re: Memory...kind of a suicide note written as a poem - February 2nd 2012, 11:01 PM

Thank you Rachel, that means a lot.
   
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Re: Memory...kind of a suicide note written as a poem - February 2nd 2012, 11:59 PM

I love this. I agree that I'm sorry that you feel like this. We're all here for you whenever.


Sing, the last thing on your mind
The last word on your breath
I'll be the one to keep you
I'll keep you at your best



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Re: Memory...kind of a suicide note written as a poem - February 3rd 2012, 12:03 AM

You're are very welcome. I'm glad it means a lot to you. It's nice to know I'm doing something good.


I got off track I've made mistakes Back slid my way to that place where souls get lost lines get crossed and the pain won't go away.
R.I.P. Tatyana Sawka June 20, 1998- April 9, 2012
   
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