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Song-Heartless -
February 2nd 2012, 11:08 PM
Here is another one of my songs.It is called Heartless.Tell me what you think guys
 I don't know how you could be so cold. Now I've lost my soul cos your so heartless. You think it's cool to be cold. Yet you never realize how love dies when it loses it's soul. All i wanna do is cry cos now I'm feeling sick. There's nothing but darkness inside you and It's making me feel like I'm the one to blame but now i realize i've been broken by a wreck you call life now your in your element and im all alone. but there is much more to life than you so why dont you just wake up and take a look at yourself. |
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Re: Song-Heartless -
February 2nd 2012, 11:37 PM
I like it
. "But now I realize I've been broken by a wreck you call life"-- I love that line. what kind of songs do you write? Like what genre?
You believe there's somewhere else
Where it's easier than this And you see outside yourself And you buy the hole you'll fill -Foo Fighters |
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Re: Song-Heartless -
February 2nd 2012, 11:57 PM
Oh wow! I really like it! It is amazing.
 I got off track I've made mistakes Back slid my way to that place where souls get lost lines get crossed and the pain won't go away. R.I.P. Tatyana Sawka June 20, 1998- April 9, 2012 |
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Re: Song-Heartless -
February 3rd 2012, 03:40 PM
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thanks  yeah,I think that's my favourite line of this song aswell.Well.....all my songs are kind of the same type as this one.I have another one in this forum(called Turn Back The Clock).
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